Glorious Divine Hallowed

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flare of rings crimson sight fount spring linger carnations with frills rubescent frenzy shade the twilight in ruby-red rapture how do leave your mind's richness fit space save December 11, 2022

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/11/2022 12:06:00 PM

Great poem.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 12/11/2022 10:08:00 AM

Have to tell you, I’ve spent nearly an hr on this one! It first made me wonder why u weren’t referring to red rose of Sharon. Checked the symbolism. Carnations = love, passion, the petals = “spreading” so I took the def of fount as Providence not a water spring, also cause of your title & poem shape. Thus the frenzy, rapture, ? Of space & save. I don’t get ‘rings’ tho. Superb description of the event!

Sotto Poet
Date: 12/11/2022 10:42:00 AM

Thank you for your generosity, Sally, and please accept my apologies for devoting an hour to this poem. The major theme is about females who blush and wish they were dead to avoid blame. They, like midges, go too close to the fire of life and flare up. With gnat-like wings, roses, and gold rings. The first five lines are the dilemma's preamble, and the rest is a remedy to draw close to God and spare one's life from strife. I hope this helps.