Gloating

GLOATING
At least I am full. I got a roof over my head. I can go and find relief when I need it. Can you say the same? Of course, not, you don’t know the game. I am not gloating because I am proud of who I am. I am not a show-off by stating where I stand. I will step to the cause to take care of myself. You should do the same when you know you should do better. I paid two hundred dollars for these shoes. The outfit I am wearing was a good bit too. I had my teeth fixed through my insurance. I am thanking the good Lord for all he does. Do you do the same when you are blessed? Of course, not, you think you did all this by yourself. I am gloating about how good God is to me. I want the world to see. When your faith is shown through your glory, Let the world know whose Jehovah. I am double Mastered. I am a rhymester. I am a mental strategist. I am fulfilled. I have walked a treacherous path. The Almighty God was visionary. He spoke at the most precarious times. He told me he was by my side. I know you say I am gloating. Might I do just that? God said spread his will and his way to everybody. _____________________________________| PENNED ON AUGUST 12, 2014!
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Bordner Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 1:53 PM
The things that you delineate in this poem are what make you happy Verlena. What better way to gloat than to show God's intervention, inspiration in your life. Going into this crazy world with a confident and happy smile. I like the swagger of your Faith. J.A.B.
Walker  Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 2:39 PM
Thanks Justin for your compliments and supportive remarks. Verlena
Lindley Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 11:07 PM
Man is but a fog that disappears when the SON shines. We do things we think great but God knows are less than nothing. Great write my friend.
Walker  Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 11:19 PM
Thanks Robert for your supportive remarks on "Gloating." Sending a hug, Verlena.
Sathasivam Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 8:08 AM
Excellent. Very thoughtful write. Enjoyed. Tfs
Walker  Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 3:54 PM
Thanks Ravi... Verlena
Lamoureux Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 2:31 PM
It is good that you give God the glory. Whatever talents we possess are as a result of His kindness. The trechorous path is to begin to think that all we have has been earned and deserved. Trechory also lies within holding to tightly to these temporary gifts and failing to share them with those less fortunate. Another thought provoking piece.
Walker  Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 6:07 PM
Thanks Richard for your positive feedback and discussion. Verlena
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