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Gloaming

Sponsor	Mark Toney
Contest Name	2025 Poetry Marathon Mile 3

The day is done. Travel dispersed, no more roaming. Between dusk and sunset, it’s the gloaming. I settle to watch, inspired by that instant moment, When day gives over to night a regal bestowment. Lights begin to shimmer, as we near twilight. Across the horizon created a radiant glow so bright. This magical moment captured with a deep ruby hue. Detailing an exquisite hefty crimson etched in view. Streams of color blend seamlessly in swirls of delight. Heavily embossed across the faded sky, birds in flight. Sunset’s glowing color of crimson and gold, As night’s velvety blanket begins to unfold. Whispers of a breeze wafting gently, flickers a scent. Evokes aromatic bursts, sensual yet earthy by intent. With a sweetness, and a warm tranquil overtone. I am nestled snugly, captivated by joy I've never known. Capturing my imagination of a candle in glorious blaze, My breath extinguishing it to create the dark night haze.
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Eslinger Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 5:56 PM
A jewel! A fav ! Volumeskbyou are a painter and a born poet, so destined to this briar path by the Lord Himself …so, hope you’re not still seeking you pupose in life….you’ve volumes yet to speak. Especially loved the sentence per line format, too, Afterall, they were are declarative…. My big hugs, sally
Volumes Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 7:53 PM
Now its my turn to cry. Oh thank you Sally for your wonderful comment. I will strive to be worthy of it one day. My devoted gratitude.
Poet Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 3:29 PM
Back with heartfelt congratulations on your top win with this lovely poem.
Volumes Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 7:51 PM
Thank you dear friend.
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June 26, 2023 at 11:16 AM
VS, The exquisite transition from dusk to sunset, adorned with an array of vivid hues, is akin to a splendid work of art. Your poem, dear friend, is truly extraordinary! It captivates the reader with its sheer descriptive power, devoid of any narrative. Undoubtedly, it is a precious gem, radiating its profound message with utmost brilliance.
Volumes Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 12:23 PM
I hoped you would like it SP. It was your encouragement of my poems lately that gave me the incentive to try a poem with no story. I have tried and failed many times before, but this time you were the wind beneath my wings. Thank you so much.
Narain Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 11:07 AM
Nicely penned. This is one of the best sunset poems. Good luck in contest.
Volumes Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 12:20 PM
Jay I am so happy to know you liked it. No story to back it up, and it was still liked ! That seems incredible to me. Thank you so much for your lovely comment.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 9:54 AM
Did you say you are not a seasoned poet? On the contrary, this is magnificent. Best for a win.
Volumes Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 12:17 PM
So glad you liked it Victor. This one was actually written as I watched from my open window, twight approached and lights from distant houses began to shine and the distant horizen came aglow with colour, so I just wrote what I saw and smelled.
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June 26, 2023 at 6:59 AM
- Beautiful and colorful between dusk and sunset ... a wonderful poem, S.V. - Best wishes in the contest ... a winning poem in my eyes and ears :) - hugs
Volumes Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 12:12 PM
Anne- Lise, I woke up this morning to see yours and the other beautiful comments. Truly, I have the win already in these wonderful comments. Its more than I could ask for. Thank you so very much.
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June 26, 2023 at 3:29 AM
Beautifully done. Love it. God bless you with love, Gina
Volumes Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 3:52 AM
Oh Gina thank you so very much. This is the very first poem I have ever written that is completely descriptive with no story. I have long envied you and other talented poets that could do it. Young Jenna was my inspirtation ages ago, but my attempts were futile. This one I am pleased enough with it to let it be shown. Again thank you so very much.
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