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Glistening Pastures

Morning dew glistens, Illuminating the plains; Sparkling scenery.

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/21/2009 7:57:00 AM

Hey Raul, sounds like a new tenure of hope blooming everywhere ... bring that morning on, brother.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 5/18/2009 11:34:00 PM

I see them everyday as I go to school. I love how you mangaged to capture their essence.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 5/17/2009 4:15:00 PM

Dear Haiku Sensei Raul, A Masterpiece for the POETRY Hall of Fame YOU Excell ALWAYS...HG Soup Mail Call

James Fraser

Date: 5/17/2009 1:54:00 PM

Raul, when i am brave enought to vnture Haiku, i hope they meet a fraction of your incredible work, i never knew so few words could say so much, quite incredible to be honest, James

Tyler Martin

Date: 5/13/2009 12:51:00 PM

Great title, your topics are so vast. Don't see how you can create so much, Raul..Tyler

Charlene Bird

Date: 5/12/2009 8:57:00 PM

Dear Rueben you do have a way with these Haiku's always painting peaceful and beautiful pictures.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/12/2009 6:51:00 PM

Another great haiku from the master! BG

Date: 5/12/2009 6:02:00 PM

Nice view. Has me smiling. Good use of imagery for a creative poem. Enjoyed it. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/12/2009 8:40:00 AM

You see things with such keen eyes, Raul. Another lovely vision here! ~ love, Carrie

Fernando Lachica

Date: 5/12/2009 6:24:00 AM

A beautiful outlook of the nature's bounty...feeling the beauty inside your heart Raul. Lovely!

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/12/2009 5:23:00 AM

A dazzling haiku. Too beautiful the vision in my mind's eye! Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/12/2009 4:54:00 AM

Line tow is awesome..my mind is trying to wrap around an illuminated plains with dew..brilliant writing brother...