Glistening Pastures

Morning dew glistens,
Illuminating the plains;
Sparkling scenery.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shango Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 7:57 AM
Hey Raul, sounds like a new tenure of hope blooming everywhere ... bring that morning on, brother.
Neal Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 11:34 PM
I see them everyday as I go to school. I love how you mangaged to capture their essence.
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May 17, 2009 at 4:15 PM
Dear Haiku Sensei Raul, A Masterpiece for the POETRY Hall of Fame YOU Excell ALWAYS...HG Soup Mail Call
Fraser Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 1:54 PM
Raul, when i am brave enought to vnture Haiku, i hope they meet a fraction of your incredible work, i never knew so few words could say so much, quite incredible to be honest, James
Martin Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 12:51 PM
Great title, your topics are so vast. Don't see how you can create so much, Raul..Tyler
Bird Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 8:57 PM
Dear Rueben you do have a way with these Haiku's always painting peaceful and beautiful pictures.
Gorelick Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 6:51 PM
Another great haiku from the master! BG
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May 12, 2009 at 6:02 PM
Nice view. Has me smiling. Good use of imagery for a creative poem. Enjoyed it. Karen
Richards Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 8:40 AM
You see things with such keen eyes, Raul. Another lovely vision here! ~ love, Carrie
Lachica Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 6:24 AM
A beautiful outlook of the nature's bounty...feeling the beauty inside your heart Raul. Lovely!
Winter Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 5:23 AM
A dazzling haiku. Too beautiful the vision in my mind's eye! Love, Shar
Higgins Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 4:54 AM
Line tow is awesome..my mind is trying to wrap around an illuminated plains with dew..brilliant writing brother...
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