Glimpses of You

Glimpses of you… An image so mesmerizing, I bask in shame to rely on these bedazzled eyes So full of wisdom and heart, your globes keep me glazed Grazed on the swift-shotted bullet of your gaze Do not let him see how he drives me mad Get your head out of space, decapitate this case This spell of ever-turning lust crumbles me to dust For this love both devastates and fulfills me Makes a monster out of me—strong-wills me! I ache—god, how I ache As I reach for a touch of your glorious existence Darting through the crackled splinters of resistance It is a throbbing pain pulsing in my brain Wetting the corners of philosophic peaks To discover your roots are for another I drive down underneath Take a shot of your toughest glass And turn your head away from the lure Push it aside that his intentions are pure Find a path towards the sycamore Focus on the tree’s gallant twists In life never succumbing to the neurotic mists She grows toward the sun like she needs no one! Worrying not of the bullets—for she is the gun Stand tall amongst the majority’s dream of original Your heights will keep you satisfied For in lust we only die The sun’s strong rays provide the hope for better days Yet still at times the branches twist and rest upon his gaze

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Date: 8/24/2014 2:05:00 AM
As usual, I'm rereading your novel poetry, your outstanding heart Laura. The first verse is wildly sensuous, and it really sets the tone for this fight between resistence and acquiescence of a love that seems to injure yet also serves to embolden and stimulate every part of you. I understand this love ache. " Wetting the corners of philosophic peaks..." that's meaty poetry...J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/24/2014 11:18:00 AM
Justin, thank you for your sweet visits...it is always nice to hear what unique things you have to say regarding my current work. I reread your work very often because your poetry stirs in me something very new, interesting, philosophic and positively meaningful. I could only hope my poetry does the same for you.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/24/2014 11:18:00 AM
Yes, sometimes we must look beyond our lusts and focus greater heights...toward the sun..nature around us reveals to us the true and fine way to love. Thanks again for your kindness...you're amazing!~Always,Laura
Date: 8/23/2014 9:27:00 PM
Lust can lead us to what we must trust Laura. There is a tension and splendor in your beauty, your beautiful hunger, your beautiful resolve. You know how to love...J.A.B.
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Date: 8/23/2014 2:46:00 PM
This is a very fascinating write, Laura...Love can both devastate and fulfill, for that is what love does. We all carry certain aches in our hearts. This write has heart and soul....and advice. Great write.
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