Glimpses

The grass waved hello
the birds called back.
Telegraph poles stood still 
like tall slender trees.
the birds liked that.
the crickets a constant tickle in the ear,
swathes of brown grass bouncing back after drought,
three troughs haphazard on a patch without
any grass. Bare dark earth.
the raven makes its cry
under a bright grey sky,
on a swampy, sweaty day .
my dog companion at my feet

"Come on then, let's go home."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Morris Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 1:49 AM
Interesting, thought-provoking poem. Creates a vision in one's mind's eye. Hope your dog enjoys the walks. Thanks for sharing. :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 9:07 AM
An enjoyable writing style, you have. You notice and impact us with imagery!
Faure Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 10:43 AM
Wow! Enjoyed very much!
Agustin Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 7:16 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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