Jenish Somadas Poet Free verse

Glimpse of Truth

Golden strings of life singing exuberance of birth
Silver strings of death ringing grievance of fate
Between life and death wandered cotton clouds
Shedding shine of sun or pouring useless tears

Winding mysteries of labyrinths lying ahead
Waiting to tread to a denizen of paradise
O man, your frenzied footsteps of lies sure ‘ll fail
When the holy glimpse of truth in the florid firmament.



Date of Entry : 20-08-2020

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David Smith October 9, 2023 at 5:04 PM Does not matter who we are or where we live, we are all given glimpses of what is to come and how to prepare, but in modern world the glimpse is like a dream we soon forget or choose not to remember. I pray for your safety and peace of mind with all that is unfolding at moment. Best regards David in NZ

Linda Alice Fowler January 22, 2021 at 10:50 AM A very poignant and insightful write Jenish. Lovely alliterations and imagery. :) Linda

Anisha Dutta September 5, 2020 at 9:19 PM Splendid composition. I admire your choice of words. 'Frenzied footsteps', 'florid firmament' Amazing expression. Nice picture. Love. Jenish Somadas September 7, 2020 at 10:00 PM Thank you Anisha for your kind support.. Have a great day..

V. Deepa August 25, 2020 at 6:09 AM Beautiful words with striking imageries.. Waiting to tread to a denizen of paradise~ such lovely lines in your compact work Jenish sir. Keep inspiring.Take care.:-) Jenish Somadas September 7, 2020 at 9:59 PM Thank you Deepa for your delightful comment.. Have a great day..

Caren Krutsinger August 22, 2020 at 11:35 AM Wonderful imagery superseded with the gloriousness of your metaphors. Jenish Somadas September 7, 2020 at 9:58 PM Thank you Caren for your kind support..

Gershon Wolf August 20, 2020 at 4:47 PM Lies sprout on the side of the earth I live in. Chicago may be the epicenter of lies in North America, in fact. Oops. Forgot about Cuba. OK We're #2... As for the Middle East, I'll only say that Egyptians thought that their country won the 1967 Six-Day War with Israel until 1973. (They were utterly smeared, as you probably know). lol. Truth doesn't stand much of a chance around here really. It's the holy grail, all right... :) gw Jenish Somadas September 7, 2020 at 9:58 PM lol... Thanks for the funny comments Gershon.. Lies sure will sprout, but when the rays of truth hit them strong, they will die..

Sigrid Ermine August 20, 2020 at 4:29 PM Darn, you have hit this topic with easy grace, poetic flair. Golden and silver threads of life and death. I am so impressed with your ability to fit so much in to your sweetly worded poems. ncredibly sage notes. Wonderful write, Jenish. Jenish Somadas September 7, 2020 at 9:55 PM Thank you Sigrid for a fine review.. Have a great day..

Andrea Dietrich August 20, 2020 at 3:17 PM wow, Jenish, beautiful imagery and message as well! Jenish Somadas September 7, 2020 at 9:55 PM Thank you Andrea..