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Glimmer of Sun

Sun peeks from behind tree line. Soft remnant of cold day Which did not warm up until late afternoon. Last bit of optimism Slipping away fast With glimmer of sun. Making room for cold, dark, evening. Moon smiles, recognizing Sun’s deference to his authority.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 12/28/2019 10:45:00 AM
Caren, nicely penned to read on a cold winter day in Canada !
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/28/2019 11:14:00 AM
Thank you Constance. It is supposed to be 60 degrees plus here in Kansas today!
Date: 12/28/2019 6:30:00 AM
Making room for cold, dark, evening. Moon smiles, recognizing Sun’s deference to his authority. like it so much
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/28/2019 11:14:00 AM
Thank you dear reader friend.
Date: 12/28/2019 3:39:00 AM
Marvelous imagery dearest, Caren. Even in Greece got cold.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/28/2019 11:14:00 AM
It is so warm here today, it is ridiculous!
Date: 12/27/2019 11:05:00 PM
How the mighty have fallen. Lovely poem, Caren. :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/27/2019 11:27:00 PM
Thank you Evelyn. I was staring at the sun disappearing behind the trees when I wrote this one.
Date: 12/27/2019 7:18:00 PM
Warm not hot in Atlanta! Crazy weather even for Georgia!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/27/2019 8:05:00 PM
It will be in the 60’s here tomorrow. Weird for Kansas.

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