Caren Krutsinger Poet Personification

Glimmer of Sun

Sun peeks from behind tree line.
Soft remnant of cold day
Which did not warm up until late afternoon.

Last bit of optimism
Slipping away fast 
With glimmer of sun.

Making room for cold, dark, evening.
Moon smiles, recognizing
Sun’s deference to his authority.

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Constance La France December 28, 2019 at 10:45 AM Caren, nicely penned to read on a cold winter day in Canada ! Caren Krutsinger December 28, 2019 at 11:14 AM Thank you Constance. It is supposed to be 60 degrees plus here in Kansas today!

Camelia Radu December 28, 2019 at 6:30 AM Making room for cold, dark, evening. Moon smiles, recognizing Sun’s deference to his authority. like it so much Caren Krutsinger December 28, 2019 at 11:14 AM Thank you dear reader friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis December 28, 2019 at 3:39 AM Marvelous imagery dearest, Caren. Even in Greece got cold. Caren Krutsinger December 28, 2019 at 11:14 AM It is so warm here today, it is ridiculous!

Evelyn Judy Buehler December 27, 2019 at 11:05 PM How the mighty have fallen. Lovely poem, Caren. :) Caren Krutsinger December 27, 2019 at 11:27 PM Thank you Evelyn. I was staring at the sun disappearing behind the trees when I wrote this one.

Kim Rodrigues December 27, 2019 at 7:18 PM Warm not hot in Atlanta! Crazy weather even for Georgia! Caren Krutsinger December 27, 2019 at 8:05 PM It will be in the 60’s here tomorrow. Weird for Kansas.