Sandra Adams Poet Nonet

Gliding Dove

love
this dove
glides above
the hush of night
on its endless flight
to share this song of plight
my voice tarried on night's wings
soul's symphony to you it brings
this melody within my heart's strings




(not for contest)

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Charles Messina November 13, 2019 at 8:53 PM How beautiful is this! I love it Sandra. I am sorry that I didn't allow poems with rhyme patters as of to be allowed. This would have ranked tops. Awesome write my dear friend. Hugs Always...Charlie PS: Thanks for the mail to show me this gem :) Sandra Adams November 14, 2019 at 5:02 AM Thank you for inspiring this one. I told you I would post it regardless so you could see it... glad you enjoyed it as it was a fun write :) hugs

Ronald D Thompson November 7, 2019 at 6:23 PM To share this song of plight - that's a cool line. Great work Sandra, very well penned...Ron :) Sandra Adams November 7, 2019 at 6:53 PM thank you so much Ron...it was a challenging, but enjoyable write... :)

M. L. Kiser November 6, 2019 at 3:22 PM This is really beautiful; full of tranquility. Sandra Adams November 6, 2019 at 6:42 PM Thank you so very much ML :) hugs

Alexis Y. November 6, 2019 at 8:50 AM Hi Sandra, Although this not for the contest, I love the message within this piece. It's beautifully crafted and well written. Have a great day:-) Alexis Sandra Adams November 6, 2019 at 9:14 AM Thank you so much Alexis... this was my first write and my favorite of the two... hugs :)

Hello There November 5, 2019 at 10:59 PM a beautiful gift for a special someone, a fave for me Sandra Adams November 6, 2019 at 9:15 AM Thank you so much...i am touched that you faved this one... this was my first write for the contest until i learned it had to be mono rhyme... hugs

Juliet Ligon November 5, 2019 at 10:08 PM This is pretty. Good idea to do rhyme in groups of three. Sandra Adams November 6, 2019 at 9:15 AM thank you Juliet....i liked breaking it like this but the contest calls for mono rhyme... hugs

Cecilia Macfarlane November 5, 2019 at 9:29 PM Beautiful poem Sandra. Hugs Sandra Adams November 6, 2019 at 9:16 AM Thank you so much Cecilia :) hugs

John Hamilton November 5, 2019 at 12:14 PM Love this rhyming poem, when you try to rhyme you do it well, loved this little gem! Sandra Adams November 5, 2019 at 12:18 PM thank you so much John...it was supposed to be for a contest of rhyming nonet...i wrote this and then asked the judge if it had to be mono, it did, so i kept this because i loved it but then wrote the other one for the contest... hugs :)

Gordon Mcconnell November 5, 2019 at 9:55 AM So lovely a piece Sandy, it catches the eyes to don't let go of its flow. Sandra Adams November 5, 2019 at 12:02 PM thank you so much Gordon :) hugs

Chris Green November 5, 2019 at 7:11 AM You are on a Nonet roll my friend. 9 wonderful lines that create the most amazing thoughts in the mind. Really beautiful Sandy. Sandra Adams November 5, 2019 at 7:32 AM Thank you my friend I wrote this one first then asked the judge if we could mix the rhymes up he said no he wanted mono rhyme so I kept the last 3 lines to build the other poem but this one is my favorite of the two ... hugs :). Good morning Chris

Vijay Pandit November 5, 2019 at 6:38 AM Loved the tone and melody, Sandy. Sandra Adams November 5, 2019 at 7:32 AM Thank you so much Vijay I loved this one but had to have mono for the contest :) hugs

Judy Ball November 5, 2019 at 2:33 AM Ah love is a many splendored thing when it is returned but if it is not it is a painful thing to endure. Nicely done Sandra. God Bless, JB Sandra Adams November 5, 2019 at 7:33 AM Thank you so much Judy it was a fun write :) hugs

Caren Krutsinger November 4, 2019 at 11:27 PM It may not be for a contest, but it is a winner. Sandra Adams November 5, 2019 at 7:34 AM Thank you so much Caren I wrote this one first. Then read the rules. I loved it so kept it :) hugs