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gliding dove



love
this dove
glides above
the hush of night
on its endless flight
to share this song of plight
my voice tarried on night's wings
soul's symphony to you it brings
this melody within my heart's strings




(not for contest)

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Date: 11/13/2019 8:53:00 PM
How beautiful is this! I love it Sandra. I am sorry that I didn't allow poems with rhyme patters as of to be allowed. This would have ranked tops. Awesome write my dear friend. Hugs Always...Charlie PS: Thanks for the mail to show me this gem :)
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Date: 11/14/2019 5:02:00 AM
Thank you for inspiring this one. I told you I would post it regardless so you could see it... glad you enjoyed it as it was a fun write :) hugs
Date: 11/7/2019 6:23:00 PM
To share this song of plight - that's a cool line. Great work Sandra, very well penned...Ron :)
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Date: 11/7/2019 6:53:00 PM
thank you so much Ron...it was a challenging, but enjoyable write... :)
Date: 11/6/2019 3:22:00 PM
This is really beautiful; full of tranquility.
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Date: 11/6/2019 6:42:00 PM
Thank you so very much ML :) hugs
Date: 11/6/2019 8:50:00 AM
Hi Sandra, Although this not for the contest, I love the message within this piece. It's beautifully crafted and well written. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/6/2019 9:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Alexis... this was my first write and my favorite of the two... hugs :)
Date: 11/5/2019 10:59:00 PM
a beautiful gift for a special someone, a fave for me
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Date: 11/6/2019 9:15:00 AM
Thank you so much...i am touched that you faved this one... this was my first write for the contest until i learned it had to be mono rhyme... hugs
Date: 11/5/2019 10:08:00 PM
This is pretty. Good idea to do rhyme in groups of three.
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Date: 11/6/2019 9:15:00 AM
thank you Juliet....i liked breaking it like this but the contest calls for mono rhyme... hugs
Date: 11/5/2019 9:29:00 PM
Beautiful poem Sandra. Hugs
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Date: 11/6/2019 9:16:00 AM
Thank you so much Cecilia :) hugs
Date: 11/5/2019 12:14:00 PM
Love this rhyming poem, when you try to rhyme you do it well, loved this little gem!
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Date: 11/5/2019 12:18:00 PM
thank you so much John...it was supposed to be for a contest of rhyming nonet...i wrote this and then asked the judge if it had to be mono, it did, so i kept this because i loved it but then wrote the other one for the contest... hugs :)
Date: 11/5/2019 9:55:00 AM
So lovely a piece Sandy, it catches the eyes to don't let go of its flow.
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Date: 11/5/2019 12:02:00 PM
thank you so much Gordon :) hugs
Date: 11/5/2019 7:11:00 AM
You are on a Nonet roll my friend. 9 wonderful lines that create the most amazing thoughts in the mind. Really beautiful Sandy.
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Date: 11/5/2019 7:32:00 AM
Thank you my friend I wrote this one first then asked the judge if we could mix the rhymes up he said no he wanted mono rhyme so I kept the last 3 lines to build the other poem but this one is my favorite of the two ... hugs :). Good morning Chris
Date: 11/5/2019 6:38:00 AM
Loved the tone and melody, Sandy.
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Date: 11/5/2019 7:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay I loved this one but had to have mono for the contest :) hugs
Date: 11/5/2019 3:32:00 AM
Not for a contest but certainly better than mine. Hugs.
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Date: 11/5/2019 7:33:00 AM
This was my favorite of my two. I thought yours was good. Hugs
Date: 11/5/2019 2:33:00 AM
Ah love is a many splendored thing when it is returned but if it is not it is a painful thing to endure. Nicely done Sandra. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/5/2019 7:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Judy it was a fun write :) hugs
Date: 11/4/2019 11:27:00 PM
It may not be for a contest, but it is a winner.
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Date: 11/5/2019 7:34:00 AM
Thank you so much Caren I wrote this one first. Then read the rules. I loved it so kept it :) hugs