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Gliding Dove

love this dove glides above the hush of night on its endless flight to share this song of plight my voice tarried on night's wings soul's symphony to you it brings this melody within my heart's strings (not for contest)

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Charles Messina

Date: 11/13/2019 8:53:00 PM

How beautiful is this! I love it Sandra. I am sorry that I didn't allow poems with rhyme patters as of to be allowed. This would have ranked tops. Awesome write my dear friend. Hugs Always...Charlie PS: Thanks for the mail to show me this gem :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/14/2019 5:02:00 AM

Thank you for inspiring this one. I told you I would post it regardless so you could see it... glad you enjoyed it as it was a fun write :) hugs

Ronald D Thompson

Date: 11/7/2019 6:23:00 PM

To share this song of plight - that's a cool line. Great work Sandra, very well penned...Ron :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/7/2019 6:53:00 PM

thank you so much Ron...it was a challenging, but enjoyable write... :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/6/2019 3:22:00 PM

This is really beautiful; full of tranquility.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/6/2019 6:42:00 PM

Thank you so very much ML :) hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/6/2019 8:50:00 AM

Hi Sandra, Although this not for the contest, I love the message within this piece. It's beautifully crafted and well written. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/6/2019 9:14:00 AM

Thank you so much Alexis... this was my first write and my favorite of the two... hugs :)

Hello There

Date: 11/5/2019 10:59:00 PM

a beautiful gift for a special someone, a fave for me

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/6/2019 9:15:00 AM

Thank you so much...i am touched that you faved this one... this was my first write for the contest until i learned it had to be mono rhyme... hugs

Juliet Ligon

Date: 11/5/2019 10:08:00 PM

This is pretty. Good idea to do rhyme in groups of three.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/6/2019 9:15:00 AM

thank you Juliet....i liked breaking it like this but the contest calls for mono rhyme... hugs

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 11/5/2019 9:29:00 PM

Beautiful poem Sandra. Hugs

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/6/2019 9:16:00 AM

Thank you so much Cecilia :) hugs

John Hamilton

Date: 11/5/2019 12:14:00 PM

Love this rhyming poem, when you try to rhyme you do it well, loved this little gem!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/5/2019 12:18:00 PM

thank you so much John...it was supposed to be for a contest of rhyming nonet...i wrote this and then asked the judge if it had to be mono, it did, so i kept this because i loved it but then wrote the other one for the contest... hugs :)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 11/5/2019 9:55:00 AM

So lovely a piece Sandy, it catches the eyes to don't let go of its flow.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/5/2019 12:02:00 PM

thank you so much Gordon :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 11/5/2019 7:11:00 AM

You are on a Nonet roll my friend. 9 wonderful lines that create the most amazing thoughts in the mind. Really beautiful Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/5/2019 7:32:00 AM

Thank you my friend I wrote this one first then asked the judge if we could mix the rhymes up he said no he wanted mono rhyme so I kept the last 3 lines to build the other poem but this one is my favorite of the two ... hugs :). Good morning Chris