Glide

Glide..... Glide into and out Troubles come without a doubt Inside you there is a way Frightening you as it may Become your most valued component Deal with troubles seize the moment By recognizing the way to the light Anguish is simply times little bite Decide clearly in your heartmind Avenge this fate and you will find Justifing your sorrows and pains Beseech acceptance stand up again Glide....

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Derrick Burton

Date: 1/13/2009 10:06:00 AM

had to read this again. great poetry.

Derrick Burton

Date: 1/13/2009 10:05:00 AM

Hello and what a fun reading write. enjoyed the colorful words you designed the poem with. enjoyed reading iy and have a blessed day. Dont forget to check out my poem, The chocolate chip conspiracy.

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 1/8/2009 9:26:00 AM

Love the inspiring message here and the rhyme and flow by which it is conveyed. A wonderful read and write, but might I suggest rethinking the word "cease" and perhaps use "seize", but otherwise still an incredible write. Michael

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/30/2008 8:14:00 AM

oh jane, where are you? jhl

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 12/27/2008 10:39:00 AM

Where You Been?? Good advice, sometimes difficult to heed. God Bless. Vince

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/23/2008 12:12:00 PM

missed you most of all. very inspirational from some who's been away. good work. John H LovingIII

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 12/5/2008 2:45:00 AM

Hey you! So good to have you back!, glide and ride it out, well said, Jane, love, Kristin

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 12/4/2008 7:01:00 PM

Nice to see you post again.Good advice for the masses. God Bless. Vince

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/4/2008 2:52:00 PM

Great peom, I loved the tone you set...Raul

Date: 12/4/2008 11:57:00 AM

So much truth in your words. Interesting perspective here. I really like the second to last line. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Keep on writing! Karen

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/4/2008 11:57:00 AM

Another way of saying 'chill' 'til you get your perspective back again... live one day at a time and you'll be fine. A marvelous piece Jane! Best wishes, Keith