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Glazed Lull From Heaven

As evening hangs near, wrapped in silk cashmere
  It  bathes the frontier with godliness dear…
                        Winged robins I hear chanting psalms that steer
            Moonbeams to appear like glazed lull, revere
That my doubt severe    washes  a cold tear;
          Abating night’s fear… snuggling heaven’s cheer.


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Rhymers Delight—Internal Rhymes
For John Hamilton  dated  1.07.2017
Checked: www.howmanysyllables.com

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2017

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Darren White Date: 1/15/2017 10:00:00 AM So absolutely wonderful, it flows as if no effort is made! Congratulations! Login to Reply

Mark Martin Date: 1/12/2017 3:15:00 PM Well earned win! Congrats! :-) Login to Reply

Carolyn Fish Date: 1/11/2017 8:07:00 PM Congrats, very well written Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 1/11/2017 3:11:00 AM What a beautiful poem, Nette. Congratulations on your win. :) Hugs, Dane Ann Login to Reply

Sushma A. Singh Date: 1/10/2017 11:32:00 PM Beautiful! Many Congrats! Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/10/2017 4:20:00 PM Lovely, Nette! Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 1/10/2017 3:04:00 PM Back with fresh applause, Nette:) Congratulations for placing first! hugs // paul Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 1/10/2017 8:13:00 AM Congratulations Nette :) Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 1/10/2017 5:37:00 AM Absolutely wonderful, Nette:) congratulations on your top win with this heavenly write:) a 7:) Login to Reply

Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 1/9/2017 11:28:00 PM It's a fave for me. You do it every time in such a talented way. Congratulations on your top win. Login to Reply

Afzal Nusker Date: 1/9/2017 10:33:00 PM Each line is sublime. Great descriptions. Congrats on your top win, Nette. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 1/9/2017 10:18:00 PM Perfect and beautiful:-) congratulations on your win Hugs Login to Reply

Agnes Krampe Date: 1/9/2017 9:16:00 PM Congrats on your win with this lovely poem, Nette. Login to Reply

John Hamilton Date: 1/9/2017 8:10:00 PM Thanks Nette you really delivered a beautiful poem congrats on number 1 Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 1/9/2017 7:53:00 PM Nette, congratulations on your First Place win for this awesome poem! Well done! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 1/7/2017 1:22:00 PM Wow! Perfection! Good luck in the contest. I love your work...this and others. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/7/2017 11:01:00 AM - A beautiful poem, Nette :) - Good luck in the contest - *** Happy birthday dear friend !!! *** - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 1/7/2017 8:15:00 AM Very lovely, Nette; you never fail to deliver! Both content and rhyme are worthy of applause. Hugs // paul Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/7/2017 7:10:00 AM Amazingly beautiful dear, nette! Hugs and a big seven! Login to Reply

Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 1/6/2017 10:26:00 PM This is beautiful nette. It reads like a winner. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Vera Duggan Date: 1/6/2017 10:13:00 PM Hi Nette, how I love these little mono rhyme's, they are so sweet and this one is no exception, beautifully written Nette, keep them coming. Take care........Vera Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 1/6/2017 6:55:00 PM awesome monorhyme Nette this will be a hard act to follow:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/6/2017 6:23:00 PM my goodness, what a good model of how it is to be done. I need to start mine right away. Gotta find a rhyme that can go ten times!!! You did great, Nette. Login to Reply

Doug Vinson Date: 1/6/2017 4:55:00 PM Nette, no wonder so many people love you. Login to Reply Doug Vinson Date: 1/6/2017 4:56:00 PM : )

Daniel Turner Date: 1/6/2017 4:52:00 PM Splendid monorhyme, nette. Very soft, as perhaps a children's goodnight poem. Wonderful:) Login to Reply

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