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Glass of Wine

Earthen oak and vine: contain your scarlet rainstorms; swirled scents, perfect dreams.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/21/2009 3:42:00 AM

Michele, I am checking out my favorites list this morning. I see it has been awhile since you posted hope all is well with you. I love this Haiku it is rich with flavor. Love and blessings, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 6/13/2009 8:28:00 AM

Rich in burgundy aroma, nice Haiku>James

Alley Poe

Date: 5/25/2009 7:19:00 PM

Sweet poem! Great capture.... -Alley

Date: 5/22/2009 8:26:00 PM

Wonderful images convey your thoughts in a creative way in this haiku. Nice use of alliteration. Keep on writing. Enjoyed this one! Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/22/2009 6:40:00 AM

soup mail!

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/3/2009 6:52:00 PM

Nice work and best of luck in the next round...Raul

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/8/2009 10:04:00 PM

Amazing work nicely penned...Raul

Sue Mason

Date: 3/29/2009 12:26:00 PM

One glass and I'd be living a nightmare ... LOL ... no seriously this is a beautifully done haiku and its just my alcoholic sarcasm that got to my initial comment ... Anyway, Michele congratulations on your writing being featured this week at the Soup !!

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/28/2009 12:00:00 AM

Awesome Haiku! Congrats on being featured it is so well deserved. Smiles from Lolita

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 3/26/2009 9:17:00 AM

This was so nice, they featured it twice. God Bless. Vince

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 3/26/2009 9:15:00 AM

Congrats again on the double feature. Vince

Daver Austin

Date: 3/26/2009 7:39:00 AM

A super haiku! Lots of imagination...intoxicating. Congrats on the selection, Love, daver

Effie Blake

Date: 3/25/2009 8:32:00 PM

Virtual quaff with a fragrant bouquet here ... lovely sentiments. Peace.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/25/2009 12:18:00 PM

great feature, Michele! love this haiku, Jim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/25/2009 10:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Kirstie Fontes

Date: 3/25/2009 8:46:00 AM

Great haiku. Congratulations on being featured! Kirstie

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/23/2009 5:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar

Sue Mason

Date: 12/5/2008 9:36:00 AM

Beautifully done here, Michele. Would that perfect dreams were held by all ... smile ... for an alcoholic like me one is too many and a thousand is not enough and me and Chablis had a love affair for a long time ... LOL ... see how your simple haiku has me off and running ... LOL ... wonderful imagery and a great write!!

Daver Austin

Date: 11/23/2008 3:45:00 AM

Hi, Michelle. Stacey Haislop steered me on to your stuff. If Stacey says you are great, you are great. So, I want to read much more and ask you to submit much more. The haiku stirs imagination...that's what it's all about. Love, daver

Sean Kelly

Date: 11/15/2008 12:45:00 AM

Excellent vintage , Michele , in prefect format.. Keep on pouring !!! ....

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/14/2008 3:46:00 PM

this is very nice..I love the first line.BG

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/14/2008 3:05:00 PM

Oh, this is truly brilliant. My imagination and memory soar. Cheers. Love, Shar

Lisa Cooper

Date: 11/14/2008 3:04:00 PM

great pen, thank you for sharing and God bless.