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Glass of Wine

Earthen oak and vine:
contain your scarlet rainstorms;
swirled scents, perfect dreams.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

July 21, 2009 at 3:42 AM

Michele, I am checking out my favorites list this morning. I see it has been awhile since you posted hope all is well with you. I love this Haiku it is rich with flavor. Love and blessings, Carol

James Fraser

June 13, 2009 at 8:28 AM

Rich in burgundy aroma, nice Haiku>James

Alley Poe

May 25, 2009 at 7:19 PM

Sweet poem! Great capture.... -Alley

May 22, 2009 at 8:26 PM

Wonderful images convey your thoughts in a creative way in this haiku. Nice use of alliteration. Keep on writing. Enjoyed this one! Karen

Sharon Winter

May 22, 2009 at 6:40 AM

soup mail!

Raul Moreno

May 3, 2009 at 6:52 PM

Nice work and best of luck in the next round...Raul

Raul Moreno

April 8, 2009 at 10:04 PM

Amazing work nicely penned...Raul

Sue Mason

March 29, 2009 at 12:26 PM

One glass and I'd be living a nightmare ... LOL ... no seriously this is a beautifully done haiku and its just my alcoholic sarcasm that got to my initial comment ... Anyway, Michele congratulations on your writing being featured this week at the Soup !!

Lena Townsend

March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Awesome Haiku! Congrats on being featured it is so well deserved. Smiles from Lolita

Vince Suzadail Jr.

March 26, 2009 at 9:17 AM

This was so nice, they featured it twice. God Bless. Vince

Vince Suzadail Jr.

March 26, 2009 at 9:15 AM

Congrats again on the double feature. Vince

Daver Austin

March 26, 2009 at 7:39 AM

A super haiku! Lots of imagination...intoxicating. Congrats on the selection, Love, daver

Effie Blake

March 25, 2009 at 8:32 PM

Virtual quaff with a fragrant bouquet here ... lovely sentiments. Peace.

James Marshall Goff

March 25, 2009 at 12:18 PM

great feature, Michele! love this haiku, Jim

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 25, 2009 at 10:10 AM

Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Kirstie Fontes

March 25, 2009 at 8:46 AM

Great haiku. Congratulations on being featured! Kirstie

Sharon Winter

March 23, 2009 at 5:56 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar

Sue Mason

December 5, 2008 at 9:36 AM

Beautifully done here, Michele. Would that perfect dreams were held by all ... smile ... for an alcoholic like me one is too many and a thousand is not enough and me and Chablis had a love affair for a long time ... LOL ... see how your simple haiku has me off and running ... LOL ... wonderful imagery and a great write!!

Daver Austin

November 23, 2008 at 3:45 AM

Hi, Michelle. Stacey Haislop steered me on to your stuff. If Stacey says you are great, you are great. So, I want to read much more and ask you to submit much more. The haiku stirs imagination...that's what it's all about. Love, daver