Glass Mountain House

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I wish to live in a total glass house, built on the top of a snowy mountain; with a heated- lush and healthy greenhouse, and lovely free flowing water fountain. I could watch it . . . snowing-on-the-mountain, from within my designed glass home in awe; and view the stars sparkle and then withdraw, the moon glowing and the sun rising high. This glass space . . my retreat to write and draw, where I watch eagles that glide, drift and fly. ________________________ October 28, 2022 Poetry/Dizain/Glass Mountain House Copyright Protected, ID 10-1497-521-28 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, 2022 Poetry Marathon, Mile 18 sponsor, Mark Toney, Judged 11/02/2022 Tenth Place

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/11/2022 6:38:00 AM

Dear Constance, the poetic beauty of your Glass Mountain House is framed exquisitely within the dizain form. I share your lovely heart’s desire. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Gary Radice

Date: 11/3/2022 12:45:00 PM

Some other world Constance. A lovely space. A happy place. A poem with a lovely warm feel to it. Cheers - Gary

Constance La France
Date: 11/3/2022 2:19:00 PM

Gary, thank you so much for the visit and nice comment, it would be so nice to live in a glass house on a mountain

Mark Toney

Date: 11/2/2022 2:45:00 PM

Constance, what a lovely dizain! Your word choice is beautiful, as is the photo you chose to display. The last two lines are idyllic, "This glass space . . my retreat to write and draw, where I watch eagles that glide, drift and fly." Congratulations on your win on Mile 18 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on because Mile 19 has already started.

Constance La France
Date: 11/3/2022 10:38:00 AM

Mark, thank you so much for the inspiration and contest and my placement and for the compliment, comment and congratulations, appreciate