Glass Garden

Glass work in Venice,
Blown by the creators lungs;
Petals made of glass.





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Inspired by Dale Chihuly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Pate Avatar
April 29, 2009 at 6:42 PM
The creative genius involved in sculpturing from molten sand. You did the artist justice.
Martin Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 10:16 PM
Nice ecphrasis on Chihuly, his work is beautiful and a glass garden fits his masterpieces.
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April 27, 2009 at 5:18 PM
Nice tribute to the artist with this creative poem. So much contained in just three lines. I enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Have a wonderful week! Karen
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April 25, 2009 at 2:08 PM
Dear Sensei Raul, I LOVE the Tirle A Great Tribute to an Exceptional Artist by an Exceptional Artist ALWAYS...HG -- Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments Skiing down to the village not on an official slope Right off my front porch That's how I get to toown in the winter ALWAYS...HG
Kroeger Avatar
April 24, 2009 at 8:31 AM
aww pretty
Richards Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 6:29 PM
Soup mail reply, Raul, when you have a moment. Thanks!
Gorelick Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 1:34 PM
Beautiful piece..Its an amazing art.BG
Shango Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 8:49 AM
A very symbolic title ... great poetic imagination. Peace and love
Richards Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 8:36 AM
I was first introduced to this amazing artist...through Sharon's poem awhile back. Such beautiful works of art....your poem does him justice...he would be honored! ~ Love, Carrie (ps...I revised my entry to your contest...I realized I hadn't properly understood the Choka form....so hope I did it right this time. Thank you for the new challenge!) :)
Winter Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 5:53 AM
Oh yes. One of my favorite mind blowing artists of all time. Beautiful. Love, shar
Atanacio Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 5:28 AM
loved it although I saw right though it LOL
Higgins Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 4:48 AM
Love the title....love this ..well done.
Goff Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 4:17 AM
Raul, I love his work too!! at Mayo-clinic and Univ. Mn. Duluth I've seen it! sweet haiku! Jim
Strand Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 1:23 AM
A brilliant artist indeed,I wrote an ekphrasis on his work last year Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for youe welcome comments.
Townsend Avatar
April 22, 2009 at 11:21 PM
A beautiful image is left in my mind with this one. Great writing... as always. Thank you for you comment, I replied to your mail. Please let me know what you think of the changes, I value your opinion and advice. Smiles from Lolita
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April 22, 2009 at 10:56 PM
i love this glass garden,i love the glass created in venice,venice is very romantic and rich in history-i love all about venice,wonderful-----charma
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April 22, 2009 at 10:25 PM
Hello my friend Raul, nice Senryu. I know that glass work in Venice. My wife bought some when we went there. TY for letting me rememebr the place- The Queen of the Sea. Ernilando
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April 22, 2009 at 10:18 PM
What a beautiful image, Raul! Wish we could all create such "petals."
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