Glass- Continous Rhyme Quatrain

I'm looking through the glass window
Window of my soul 
Soul is breaking 
Breaking into pieces

Pieces that can not be fixed
Fixing this is impossible
Impossible because of my sins
Sins that I have to atone for

For I have done terrible things
Things like forget to clean my glass window
Window of my soul 
Soul is breaking 
Breaking into pieces.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 12, 2014 at 3:34 PM
Very skilful poem. Good imagery. Well written. Very best wishes, Linda
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