Valsa George Poet Rhyme

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JULY-6-2026

Bite Size Contest. No. 148

Sponsor- Line Gauthier

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Glancing on Nature

I lifted my face up and looked into sky,
Reveling in its aquamarine shade.
Stellar fragments afloat in the immensity high.

Inhaled beauty and exhaled toxic fumes.
Nature with its variety, my eyes did invade.
Seemed a peacock in strut plumes.

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sara Etgen-Baker July 13, 2026 at 3:18 PM especially liked the last line...best wishes, dear Valsa, with this contest entry

Paige Hind July 12, 2026 at 11:54 PM a fav, really like this, Valsa

Beryl Edmonds July 8, 2026 at 9:46 PM A lovely glance on nature Valsa. All the best for the contest… Beryl

sara Etgen-Baker July 8, 2026 at 4:21 PM especially liked the last line....best wishes with this contest entry, dear Valsa.

Victor Buhagiar July 8, 2026 at 1:51 AM Strange I was looking at a peacock lately. Saw some of your lovely photos too. Your poem is delightful.

Andrea Dietrich July 7, 2026 at 3:52 PM Nice unique little poem, dear. Good luck in Line's contest. I have been on a loser streak, haha

Sara Kendrick July 7, 2026 at 10:30 AM I really like this one, Valsa. It reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. I think those peacocks are beautiful. Sara K.

Joseph P. DiMino July 6, 2026 at 4:38 PM Indeed, the immensity and beauty of creation is awesome! Lofty view. Thank you. Great imagery, Valsa.

Angela Terry July 6, 2026 at 11:55 AM The imagery in this poem is amazing!

Joyce Faure July 6, 2026 at 11:49 AM Enjoyed very well!

Sotto Poet July 6, 2026 at 5:18 AM Beautifully composed poem that compels the reader to linger in its embrace. You created a work of beauty and nature with just six lines, Valsa. This is a trophy winner in my eyes.