Karam Misra Poet Tetractys

Glam Dolls

your
beauty 
is a thing 
which may not launch 
a thousand ships as  for Helen of Troy

but your glamour would stir a million hearts
or close to that 
great a sum 
so think 
I

but 
beware 
oh wondrous 
creature sublime 
what media makes it breaks in no time 

~15 Jul 2016~

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Sara Kendrick July 25, 2016 at 2:34 PM Your Triple Tetractys poem was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara Karam Misra July 25, 2016 at 10:30 PM Thank you very much for your encouraging comments and appreciation, Sara. ~karam~

Liz Ward July 23, 2016 at 8:07 AM Congrats Karam on your high placement. Lovely poem. Best wishes, Liz Karam Misra July 23, 2016 at 8:25 AM Thank you for dropping by and your wishes, Liz. ~karam~

Probir Gupta July 23, 2016 at 6:10 AM Congratulations for your win ... Karam Misra July 23, 2016 at 6:16 AM Thank you, Probir. ~karam~

Kim Rodrigues July 22, 2016 at 7:41 PM Very nice! Congrats! Karam Misra July 23, 2016 at 5:45 AM Thank you, Kim.

Andrea Dietrich July 22, 2016 at 5:42 PM I recall this one! Congrats on a great win, Karam Karam Misra July 23, 2016 at 5:43 AM Thank you, Andrea. You remember right. ~karam~

Meenakshi Raina July 22, 2016 at 1:54 PM Congratulations on your win! Karam Misra July 23, 2016 at 5:42 AM Thank you, Meenakshi. ~karam~

Sandra Haight July 22, 2016 at 1:52 PM Great both in your message and visual form, Karam. Congratulations on your fine 2nd place win! Sandra Karam Misra July 23, 2016 at 5:40 AM Thank you, Sandra.~karam~

Alexis Y. July 22, 2016 at 1:41 PM Hi Karam, Congrats on your 2nd write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis Karam Misra July 23, 2016 at 5:39 AM Thank you, Alexis. ~karam~

Andrea Dietrich July 18, 2016 at 3:33 PM awesome message in this one. Love the title too. Karam Misra July 18, 2016 at 9:41 PM Thank you for your kind comment, Andrea. ~karam~

Janice Canerdy July 16, 2016 at 11:27 AM A 7 for this SUPERB response to the prompt, Karam! Janice Karam Misra July 16, 2016 at 9:20 PM Thank you very much, Janice. ~karam~

David Smith July 16, 2016 at 6:51 AM That is so true. Glad I stopped to read it. David in NZ Karam Misra July 16, 2016 at 9:19 AM Thank you for the visit, David. ~karam~

Probir Gupta July 16, 2016 at 5:03 AM Very well written ... but the last stanza, as far as I understand, has to conform to the syllable arrangement of 1,2,3,4 and 10 ... Karam Misra July 16, 2016 at 6:12 AM Probir, can't thank you enough for pointing out the misake in the last stanza. I have corrected it. Than you, once again.

Jan Allison July 15, 2016 at 7:29 AM beautifully written Karam good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Karam Misra July 15, 2016 at 8:48 AM Thank you for the compliment and wishes, Jan. ~karam~