Giving Up

I wait for you with bated breath
In a drunken haze
I try to envision myself as 
Seductress
Knowing full well
I am a silly woman
Knowing you are undoubtedly
Unaware of my position
In this smoke filled carnival
Across the tinkling of glass to glass
And all the laughter spurred by
Unsteady brazeness
The enormity of the absurdity
Offends me
So I stagger home
Decidedly tired of trying
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 27, 2010 at 9:17 AM
I am enjoying your well written poetry this morning. Love, Joyce
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