Gershon Wolf Poet Monorhyme

Giving the Hounds the Slip

  
     plopping down ‘midst marshmallow grounds
        the bunnies advanced by leaps and bounds

     ahead of the hounds who the marshmallows found
        ~ tastier than bunnies pound-for-pound

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Bill Baker August 26, 2025 at 3:18 PM And the bunnies all sang, Thank God for the marshmallows. :-) Thanks for the smiles my friend. BB

sara Etgen-Baker August 24, 2025 at 5:11 PM oh so witty....made me think about those marshmallow bunny-shaped PEEPS on the shelves of Walmart around Easter time. I especially liked the Dr. Pepper flavored ones. Yum. Gershon Wolf August 24, 2025 at 6:53 PM At least it made you think...

Darlene De Beaulieu August 24, 2025 at 11:40 AM Hello Gershon, i think the marshmallow would taste better that the rabbit. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu August 25, 2025 at 11:33 AM Hello Gershon, yes really better than rabbit stew. LOL.We agree. Enjoy your day my friend./Darlene/ Gershon Wolf August 24, 2025 at 6:52 PM Really? Better than rabbit stew? Ha, ha. I'm with you, Darlene.

Paula Goldsmith August 24, 2025 at 11:02 AM I enjoyed reading this fun write. I will take marshmallows over cute bunnies any day... Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.................. Gershon Wolf August 24, 2025 at 6:50 PM How about chocolate marshmallow bunnies, Paula? Betch might go for them? Smiles, gw