Giving Thanks

to all the young men who stare me down-
i give you my thanks
your curvey smiles as i walk by-
i give you my thanks
i'm losing weight and loving it-
i give myself a pat on the back and say thanks!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 11:39 AM
A very belated congratulations in Patricia's "Thank-You" contest Karen. Love, Carol
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November 19, 2012 at 11:55 AM
Karen. Congratulations with your "THANK YOU" poem,, very touching... Take care :-) ~PD
Sweetheart Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 10:13 AM
CONGRATS KAREN ON A WONDERFUL WRITE AND WIN LUV .. KUDOS ON THE LOSING WEIGHT .. BET U LOOK AND FEEL STUNNING .. ENJOY ALL THOSE WINKS AND WHISTLES ..
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November 17, 2012 at 1:00 PM
A pat on the back from me too, Karen!...very cool poem...congratulations -Tim
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November 17, 2012 at 12:57 PM
THis is really cool. It is original, to thank guys for their stares. Love it!!
Dietrich Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 12:57 PM
oh, and big congrats on your win.
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November 17, 2012 at 7:48 AM
Big Congratulations Karen xx
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