Sajdah Al-Riyami Poet Blank verse

Giving My All--Sky Dreamer

I feel like rising hell
I feel like going back
To where I fell
And yet I don’t
Want a monster
On this bed
Meant for lovers
Or on these
Lips
Or on these
Hips
Or on this
Body
Meant for somebody
I wish.
No I Regret this
Regret us, what we were
I don’t want to meet this fear
And yet, I do last
For a year passed fast
And relieve what we had got
That you forgot.
God!
Just take your
‘I love you like hell’
And burn
Take back
‘You’re the only one’
And tell it to the others
Stop
Flashbacks that brought
‘And if you die-
I wanna die with you’
And bury them up yours
O yes! Now:
She’s your best friend
--I thought I was?
She’s your love for “forever”
--But you told Me that!
She’s surprisingly yummy
--It hurts...
It hurts so badly!

And yet:
Heres my smile,
Sky dreamer


Corrected By Corinne x

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Lee Nguyen July 5, 2009 at 10:19 PM this is very good. im in love with ur work.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen June 14, 2009 at 5:03 PM Sajdah, Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Matt Caliri’s “Funnest-Hardest Poem Ever. Lovingly, Dane

Sue Mason June 12, 2009 at 8:56 AM Beautiful write here, Sajdah !! Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in Matt's contest !!

James Fraser June 11, 2009 at 4:48 AM Super write Sajdah, many congratulations on your win>James

Sharon Winter June 10, 2009 at 5:48 PM Congrats on your win in Matt's contest! Love, Shar

Jay Loveless June 8, 2009 at 9:59 AM I Like This. This Is So Pretty. And I Feel This Pain. Have Before Too. I Think Its Even Harder. When They Say They Want You Back. Peace. Forever Boo Boo

Corinne Curcio June 2, 2009 at 9:11 AM I like this one Saidah - If I can make a couple of suggestions: "I feel like raising hell" is the correct expression "On these lips" "On these hips" since you have two of each! :-)