Giving Indian

Joe the lightning bear
Put on his nike air.
Ran he did, as fast he can,
Through the forest, of his ancestry land.
Frantic Joe didn't know where to go,
It's not his fault he didn't know.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 5:10 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s Indian Giver contest Sadee. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 6:40 AM
Mercedes, many congratulations on your fine win in PD's contest. Have a wonderful 2011 >> James....:)
Duffin Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 5:49 AM
Hi. Congratulations on your deserved honour. Eamon
Dietrich Avatar
December 26, 2010 at 11:48 PM
Congratulations on your win, Merecedes. An interesting one! Luv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
December 26, 2010 at 5:04 PM
Congrats Mercedes on your big win in PD's contest with this awesome entry .. enjoy with luv..
Freeman Avatar
December 26, 2010 at 9:44 AM
Joe the lightning bear, Put on his nike air. Love the effect this has Mercedes. Agape, Moses
Cwiak Avatar
December 26, 2010 at 6:37 AM
Congrats, Mercedes, on your win in the contest. Dan C
Kendrick Avatar
December 26, 2010 at 5:35 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Mehta Avatar
December 26, 2010 at 5:25 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of PD, mercedes
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December 25, 2010 at 11:12 PM
MERCEDES, CONGRATULATIONS I had so much fun reading every entry. Some where serious and awesome, hope you are enjoying your holidays,..p.d.
Mehta Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 5:33 AM
Nice funny, witty and frolicsome write you have penned on Giving Indian, mercedes
Onclaud Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 2:03 AM
really witty and full of substance! best of luck in the contest, mercedes.. warmest, nette
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