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Giving Indian

Joe the lightning bear Put on his nike air. Ran he did, as fast he can, Through the forest, of his ancestry land. Frantic Joe didn't know where to go, It's not his fault he didn't know.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/27/2010 5:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s Indian Giver contest Sadee. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 12/27/2010 6:40:00 AM

Mercedes, many congratulations on your fine win in PD's contest. Have a wonderful 2011 >> James....:)

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/27/2010 5:49:00 AM

Hi. Congratulations on your deserved honour. Eamon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2010 11:48:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Merecedes. An interesting one! Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/26/2010 5:04:00 PM

Congrats Mercedes on your big win in PD's contest with this awesome entry .. enjoy with luv..

John Freeman

Date: 12/26/2010 9:44:00 AM

Joe the lightning bear, Put on his nike air. Love the effect this has Mercedes. Agape, Moses

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 12/26/2010 6:37:00 AM

Congrats, Mercedes, on your win in the contest. Dan C

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/26/2010 5:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/26/2010 5:25:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of PD, mercedes

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2010 11:12:00 PM

MERCEDES, CONGRATULATIONS I had so much fun reading every entry. Some where serious and awesome, hope you are enjoying your holidays,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/12/2010 5:33:00 AM

Nice funny, witty and frolicsome write you have penned on Giving Indian, mercedes

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/12/2010 2:03:00 AM

really witty and full of substance! best of luck in the contest, mercedes.. warmest, nette