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"Aww that's just ol' droopy, he ain't never hurt nobody"

Given the Choice I Would

Oh-  given the choice I would-  restore it,
the derelict house in need of repair;
yes, I realize it is a big money pit,
     the ad-  a fixer upper if your dare!
     A grand facade once it had,
     now, it has tipped and slumped bad;
     it's towers and turrets sad,
                       but, after all it was built in 1893!
        If I had the cash,
          I'd fix that house in a flash;
             and soon 'cause the house is about to crash.
Oh, I see a wrap around porch in my mind,
a great entrance with wrought iron that shined;
to the fact that, the house is falling down- BLIND,
                     'cause, after all it was built in 1893!

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August 16, 2018


Poetry/Rhyme/Given The Choice I Would
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1052-654-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Pick A Theme
sponsor, Viv Wigley, Theme chosen #3- Given the choice, I would

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Wigley Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 12:39 PM
I do so love the house, Constance, but I fear renovating it would lose its charm. Worth a go, though. I'd come and sleep in the loft. Congrats on your placement, and thanks for entering my humble contest. Viv x
Horne Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 10:11 AM
this looked like a haunted house, ha ha. lovely write, my friend. thanks for the win in your last contest - loved the latest
Sharma Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 8:54 PM
Nice one
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