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your heart the candy apple of my eye 18.04.03 Composed for James Edward Lee Sr.'s MONOKU: PICK A PICTURE WHAT CHA SEE Image 1

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/21/2018 5:08:00 PM

SO Precious!! Congrats in the contest

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/22/2018 6:26:00 AM

Thank you Andrea :) xo!

Paul Callus

Date: 4/21/2018 3:22:00 PM

Well done for originality, Maureen. Congratulations on a fine top win! Regards // paul

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/22/2018 6:24:00 AM

Thank you Paul :) xomo!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/21/2018 9:45:00 AM

Congrats!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/22/2018 6:23:00 AM

Merci beaucoup :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/21/2018 6:27:00 AM

- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/22/2018 6:21:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise, your sunshine brightens :) xomo!

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/21/2018 12:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Well done!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/22/2018 6:20:00 AM

Thank you Susan :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/20/2018 11:42:00 PM

So lovely, Maureen. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal win.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/22/2018 6:19:00 AM

Thank you Line :)

Becca Teagan

Date: 4/8/2018 9:54:00 AM

You are good! I love this one! Very clever and cute poem.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/9/2018 7:15:00 AM

Sweetness! Thank you so much :) xomo!

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 4/5/2018 8:52:00 PM

Short, sweet and to the point! (Awesome!) Good luck in the contest Mo!~Che :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/6/2018 7:30:00 AM

Thank you! :) xomo!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2018 7:11:00 PM

Sweet as can be!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/5/2018 6:41:00 AM

Merci! :) xomo!

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/3/2018 10:22:00 PM

Very sweet, Maureen. Well done.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/3/2018 10:33:00 PM

Thank you :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/3/2018 9:15:00 PM

I only hope it is not on a stick. lol You seem about as sweet as a candy apple, Maureen. Fun monoku. Good luck sweetie!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/3/2018 9:27:00 PM

Bah ha ha! That sends the mind in so many directions! Thank you Daniel :) big hugs my friend! mo mo

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/3/2018 5:50:00 PM

Ohh such a delectable beauty, Maureen. Best wishes for a win! Warmest wishes and hugs, lovely. ~Susan <3

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/3/2018 9:28:00 PM

Thank you Susan! I thought for sure I'd come up with something for that red moon pic, who'd a knew? (my muse obviously lol) Cheers lovely! mo hugs

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/3/2018 3:16:00 PM

Sweet love...All the best Maureen

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/3/2018 9:29:00 PM

Thank you sweetness!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/3/2018 1:31:00 PM

Irresistible dear, Maureen! Good luck!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/3/2018 2:24:00 PM

Thank you sweet D! Hugs :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/3/2018 10:30:00 AM

aww sweet:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/3/2018 10:34:00 AM

thank YOU sweetness! :) xomo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/3/2018 10:24:00 AM

Love your monoku!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/3/2018 10:45:00 AM

I know how that goes!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/3/2018 10:32:00 AM

Thank you Kim! Transfixed by that moon I didn't think I had anything for this contest till my muse spoke thus :)

Sakshi Singh

Date: 4/3/2018 10:07:00 AM

I am just learning to write monoku...this one is amazin'! lovin'! among all examples of monoku i have read till now!...& yup! All the best for the contest...!!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/3/2018 10:29:00 AM

Thank you so much Sakshi! I'm still honing my Monoku skills, I tend to be too flowery, I'm trying to exercise simplicity :) Blessings! xomo

Chris Green

Date: 4/3/2018 9:46:00 AM

Sugary sweet beauty waits in your words. This was fun my friend. Much luck in the contest.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/3/2018 10:05:00 AM

Thank You sweetness! mo hugs <3

Silent One

Date: 4/3/2018 9:37:00 AM

Awwww.... Sweet... Do you ever think about adding images or videos? Not that your posts need any form of imagery..

Silent One
Date: 4/3/2018 12:51:00 PM

I will help. Will send you a video how to do it om FB.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/3/2018 10:04:00 AM

Thank you! <3

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/3/2018 10:03:00 AM

I do! But can't on my iPad and don't know my way well enough around on the computer.