Give Peace a Chance

Who can understand why war still exists where
there are clouds reflected in water here
History has proven its futility
even the breeze has a peaceful touch
The graves of the fallen state “they died for us”
Lizards bask on warm stones 
where we could not imagine
the compassion of our enemies
Tiny finches twitter in the hedges
How the agony of dying haunts forever those who see
Bright red ti leaves, philodendrons and crosses
of comrades fallen
In dense shadows of shower trees
greatest jubilation comes 
where Mynas squabble, good naturedly
Such a happy sound of morning
Another war is over”

If only this peace could last forever.

!0th June 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/16/2013 9:00:00 AM
My big hearty congratulations on your well-deserved super win my dear friend SuZ! love lots & big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 6/15/2013 4:44:00 PM
If only it could. Great poem, congratulations.
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Date: 6/12/2013 9:03:00 AM
There is both a subtle, yet powerful message in this wonderful poem.....telling clearly what needs to be heard......without hitting over the head. The last line says it all!
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Date: 6/11/2013 3:48:00 PM
I LOVE THIS, It is also my own personal project and conviction/
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/11/2013 6:38:00 PM
Thanks Dean. So glad you have become a premium member t
Date: 6/10/2013 5:11:00 PM
Oh, I like this..well done. BG
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