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Give Peace a Chance

Who can understand why war still exists where there are clouds reflected in water here History has proven its futility even the breeze has a peaceful touch The graves of the fallen state “they died for us” Lizards bask on warm stones where we could not imagine the compassion of our enemies Tiny finches twitter in the hedges How the agony of dying haunts forever those who see Bright red ti leaves, philodendrons and crosses of comrades fallen In dense shadows of shower trees greatest jubilation comes where Mynas squabble, good naturedly Such a happy sound of morning Another war is over” If only this peace could last forever. !0th June 2013

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Date: 6/16/2013 9:00:00 AM
My big hearty congratulations on your well-deserved super win my dear friend SuZ! love lots & big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 6/15/2013 4:44:00 PM
If only it could. Great poem, congratulations.
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Date: 6/12/2013 9:03:00 AM
There is both a subtle, yet powerful message in this wonderful poem.....telling clearly what needs to be heard......without hitting over the head. The last line says it all!
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Date: 6/11/2013 3:48:00 PM
I LOVE THIS, It is also my own personal project and conviction/
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/11/2013 6:38:00 PM
Thanks Dean. So glad you have become a premium member t
Date: 6/10/2013 5:11:00 PM
Oh, I like this..well done. BG
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