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Give Me You Lord

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Below is the poem entitled Give Me You Lord which was written by poet Obi Chidubem. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Give Me You Lord

I need he who made the flowers
And then he gave them stalks, that rest upon the branches
Need he who make the fruits
And then he gave the seeds, so they can be replanted
And they regrow, God you know
Just like rivers to Tilapias
Just like sugar to Malaysians
Lord that’s how much I need you, I promise I’ll always please you
Need your strength, wisdom and guidance 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 10/13/2017 10:02:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem. Thank you.
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Date: 9/24/2017 4:12:00 PM
Ready for him?
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Date: 9/26/2017 12:00:00 AM