Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Rhyme

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Give Me More and More

~Give More And More~
(Rhyme)


The more around I see
The more and more I want I say
Give me more and more
Give me more now I say

I don't really care at all
You can make it small or tall
Give me more today I say
Give me more and more to play

The more I see the more I want.
Give me more and more don't say you can't
I don't really care at all
It can be big as a house or tall as a wall

Give me a ladder big and as tall
Give it to me to climb that tall wall
I don't really care anymore if I fall
Anything is better than none at all

The more and more I want and I say
The more and more I see and I do
Give me more and more for today
Give me more to have and play

Give me more and more to hold and play
Give it to me small or tall I say
I don't really care if it is small as an ant
Or if it is big and mean as my aunt

Give me more and more today I say
Give it to me as high as the sky
Give it to me yellow red or blue
Give me more and more today to play

Make it big or small
Make it small or tall
Make it hairy or bold
Give it to me quick as you're told

Give me more and more I say
Give me more and more today
I don't really care if you don't want
I don't really care if you can't

Give me more and more as the sky
Give me more and more just as high
Make it big as a house
Or make it small as a mouse

Give me more and more to see with my eyes
Give me more and more to hold and play
Make it small or tall
Anything is better than none at all

Give me more and more I say
Give it to me as tall as the sky
Give me a ladder as big and tall
Give it to me to climb that wall.


Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2008


:))

December.09.2015


~ Author's Notes:

Just from a very young child's perspective of thinking sometimes, we know how kids are at times, lol...Though, this is just a children's poem and from a innocent child's
 point of view :)..

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Lara Wash December 13, 2015 at 1:09 PM To whom much is given much is required. Luke 12:48 I'm sure you can handle the responsibility Dorian Petersen Potter December 20, 2015 at 6:40 PM Thank you ever so kindly Lara,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very much I appreciate it.Just a fun children's poem:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always! And very Merry Christmas to you and Happy New Year!:)D

Angel New December 9, 2015 at 1:40 AM good poem this is so true Dorian Petersen Potter December 20, 2015 at 6:36 PM Thank you ever so kindly Angel new,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very much I appreciate it. Just a fun children's poem:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always! And very Merry Christmas to you and Happy New Year!:)D