Give Me More

I laid it down beside me
just an hour ago.
It seems I must have lost it,
or dropped it on the floor.

Why does it seem so hard
to keep it in my grasp?
I never seem to find it, where
I thought I used it last.

Now, where was it on Tuesday?
I NEVER seem to know!
The thought of it just comes to me
right when I want it most.

I needed it last weekend
but my daughter came too late.
I wanted her to see it
when my grandson came to play.

My friend around the corner
always has hers when
the time comes she must use it. 
I think she must have ten!

The pastor’s wife found hers one day,
just in the nick of time.
She always has it with her now.
“O’ Lord, where’d I put mine?”

I’ve looked inside the breadbox
and underneath my bed.
It wasn’t in the basement, now
My face is turning RED!!

“O’ Lord, I’m tired and flustered,
back where I’ve been before.
I’ve lost MY PATIENCE once again.
Oh Please, just give me more”!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 3/15/2009 4:49:00 AM
So great, O God, how great thou art
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Date: 11/11/2008 9:27:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/1/2008 3:53:00 PM
Teresa - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 10/31/2008 12:38:00 PM
Teresa, Heartiest congratulations on your poem Give Me More being featured this week. The poem is a beautiful write and its feature well deserved. Your thoughts flow gracefully until it turns into a prayer -great. -Mohammad
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Date: 10/30/2008 7:47:00 AM
Teresa - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week - This one many can relate to I'm sure -God bless
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Date: 10/29/2008 12:45:00 PM
I can sympathize and understand where you are coming from. It does take patience! Great poem about honesty! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/28/2008 9:33:00 AM
when raising kids, patience isn't a virtue. It's necessary armament. Congratulations Teresa on "Give Me More" being featured. Vince
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Date: 10/27/2008 2:44:00 PM
Hi Teresa Wow! Congrats on having this your third poem making the seni-finals and again good luck in the finals! Great job! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 10/27/2008 10:00:00 AM
Teresa, Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2008 4:22:00 PM
Very clever! Congratulations Teresa on a most well deserved featured write. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/26/2008 4:19:00 PM
This poem reminds me of the writings of Edgar Guest ... are you familar with him? Its just a great poem here, Teresa and congratulations to you on having THREE (!) of your writes included in the semi-finals of the contest here at PoetrySoup!! Good luck!
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Date: 8/29/2008 7:24:00 PM
I think it would be a very, very humorous poem and I like it alot. At my age I can relate. but in the way it is written you have no subject. (It) is not a subject. Only a opinion from an old poet. Keep writing Tony
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Date: 8/23/2008 4:34:00 AM
Clever , witty piece, Teresa ... My local Doc was sacked from our hospital , because he was losing too many of his ...
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