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Give Me Dessert

creamy cheesecake inches deep red strawberry crowned, mounds of whipped chocolate fluff cresting almond cake, maple pecan pie sticky crunch- yum! Copyright, October 27, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Betty Bateson

Date: 12/1/2014 3:43:00 PM

I want that!!!

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/16/2014 2:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your top spot win Faye.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/15/2014 5:03:00 PM

Hi Faye, returning with huge congratulations for your top win! Well-deserved! Pandita

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/15/2014 10:00:00 AM

I have gained ten pounds just reading your poem !!! Well done !!

Roy Jerden

Date: 11/15/2014 8:56:00 AM

Wish I were more of a sweets lover and this would sound appealing, but for me it's too much... Congratulations!

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/15/2014 7:04:00 AM

You prepared this dish and served it well,congrats on the win Faye.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/15/2014 3:28:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Faye - my main course and your dessert - what a feast! Hugs jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/15/2014 12:48:00 AM

Congratulations and I love desert, too :) Happy Thanksgiving. Love & prayers, Gina

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/14/2014 11:06:00 PM

BEST DESSERT, hands down. Anything pumpkin just didn't make my top three!! Also, you crafted this so well. commas in all the right places and just very deliciously described. BIG congrats in my contest.I had hoped dessert would show beneath the main course (natural order of things), but you got the top billing!!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/6/2014 6:26:00 AM

Oooooh! Heavenly, decadent dessert! I'll diet next year! This is definitely a winner! Bravo, Faye! Pandita

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/27/2014 10:59:00 PM

Wow Faye u hv made all go crazy wid this one, I cant wait anymore, sounds so delicious! Gl in contest!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/27/2014 10:23:00 PM

Cheesecake..one of the best things ever..I gained 5 # just reading this..lol. Great. BG

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 10/27/2014 9:56:00 PM

Why are you torturing me? haha. I want all that and more. Exercise can wait!

Paul Callus

Date: 10/27/2014 5:18:00 PM

Yummy for tummy!! You present an exquisite dessert dear Faye...but what about my cholesterol?! :) // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 11/15/2014 6:00:00 AM

..back with congrats...a very merited first place!

David Meade

Date: 10/27/2014 4:32:00 PM

I ate every word and I am wanting more!! I am such a glutton for good tasting nouns. All the best.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/27/2014 4:18:00 PM

mmmmmmm I on my way this sounds divineeeeeee:-) good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 10/27/2014 4:16:00 PM

Oh wow....im drooling,.... Hugs Tim

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/27/2014 3:22:00 PM

Now you are talking yummy poetry Faye. I am dying here. Everyone said they were coming for my fried Pumpkin but I am going to be at your place.