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Give Me Dessert

creamy cheesecake inches deep  
red strawberry crowned,
mounds of whipped chocolate fluff  
cresting almond cake,  
maple pecan pie
sticky crunch-
yum!

Copyright, October 27, 2014
Faye Lanham Gibson

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Betty Bateson

December 1, 2014 at 3:43 PM

I want that!!!

Brenda Meier-Hans

November 16, 2014 at 2:28 PM

Congratulations on your top spot win Faye.

Pandita Sietesantos

November 15, 2014 at 5:03 PM

Hi Faye, returning with huge congratulations for your top win! Well-deserved! Pandita

Carrie Richards

November 15, 2014 at 10:00 AM

I have gained ten pounds just reading your poem !!! Well done !!

Roy Jerden

November 15, 2014 at 8:56 AM

Wish I were more of a sweets lover and this would sound appealing, but for me it's too much... Congratulations!

Kayod5 Kayode

November 15, 2014 at 7:04 AM

You prepared this dish and served it well,congrats on the win Faye.

Jan Allison

November 15, 2014 at 3:28 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Faye - my main course and your dessert - what a feast! Hugs jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

November 15, 2014 at 12:48 AM

Congratulations and I love desert, too :) Happy Thanksgiving. Love & prayers, Gina

Andrea Dietrich

November 14, 2014 at 11:06 PM

BEST DESSERT, hands down. Anything pumpkin just didn't make my top three!! Also, you crafted this so well. commas in all the right places and just very deliciously described. BIG congrats in my contest.I had hoped dessert would show beneath the main course (natural order of things), but you got the top billing!!