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Give Me Another Life

Give me another life God why did you give me life and take my heart ? Without a soul, it's a dead feigned living, Took away my love and forced to again start ? How tough it is if I don't have a zing, Days don't pass and nights are long, No emotions, having lost interest in everything, Maybe universe calling but I can't get along, Not to appreciate yet constant stare at sky, As if disowned by you, I don't belong, Why not give me dreams and wings to fly? Abundant desires but all are dead, Why not awaken some if not imply? Why not erase some grief and put zeal in head, Replace great sorrows with some of joy, Unveil dark clouds of past to clear present ahead, God I am your living heart and no toy, Help me, bless me, send some sunshine, Few sparkling moments must to enjoy, Ecstasy warm and rich as wine, As unfurling jubilance of flag gets dues, Vibrant sentiments will intertwine, God let rains wash away all the blues, Help delicate paints mingle to give newer hues! Written September 14th, 2014 For contest' Terza Rima on anything' by Alfred Vassallo'

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Date: 9/19/2014 11:10:00 PM
Congrats on your win and thanks for your congrats on mine! This is so emotional and I love it!
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Date: 9/18/2014 10:28:00 AM
Dr Upma, congratulations... LINDA
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Date: 9/18/2014 7:46:00 AM
Congratulations Dr. Sharma on your winning poem. Somehow I find beauty in the sadness because of all the beautiful suggestions to the sad questions. I hope the rain has washed away all your blues.
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Date: 9/18/2014 7:14:00 AM
i love the tone of vulnerability with tinge of hope of this piece, Dr. Upma! Congrats
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Date: 9/18/2014 3:57:00 AM
beautifully written - sad but the final stanza is filled with renewed hope. many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/15/2014 11:36:00 AM
This is a very lovely heartfelt prayer poem and song in a lovely form my dear friend Dr. Upma. You did it very well. I'm pretty sure it will do well in the contest. Best wishes always! Thank you so much for sharing and also for your lovely visit on my poems. love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 9/15/2014 6:39:00 AM
Reads like winning material to me..Way to go with this one..Thanks for visiting..I am glad that you wrote this one..I was wondering about this form..Sara
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Date: 9/15/2014 6:22:00 AM
beautifully written and the sadness speaks out clearly like dew drops catching your sight in morning sun.... God bless you
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Date: 9/15/2014 12:23:00 AM
Beauty blended with sadness and pains with hopes and smiles which peeps from the dark clouds in this beautiful write and that too in a new form Dr. Upma. Good contribution. My good wishes for your contest. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 9/14/2014 1:56:00 PM
Beautiful example of this form.... You should do well in the contest.... Good luck ...Love ya.... Jake
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Date: 9/14/2014 1:02:00 PM
great write. i hope you rank high in the contest.
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Date: 9/14/2014 9:52:00 AM
Very well crafted Terza Rima, Dr. Upma
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Date: 9/14/2014 8:05:00 AM
Nicely done. I wish you the best in the contest. Love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 9/14/2014 7:55:00 AM
always stay in hope for the help in universe,, wonderful
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Date: 9/14/2014 3:37:00 AM
Very lovely Dr. Upma. I love the way you ended it too!
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