Give It To Me One More Time

Dark you glow 'gainst the
shade of my lightness.

In ya go, outcha go
no doubt about it.

Butterflies, lullabies
much way around it.

Do I care? Do you care?
Let's think about it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
October 15, 2011 at 1:52 PM
You're on a roll Nancy, wish it had another 10 lines. Great message between the lines luv. :)
Fraser Avatar
October 15, 2011 at 9:54 AM
This is a little gem Nancy, it sure leaves the reader thinking. Have a lovely weekend :)
Sapp Avatar
October 14, 2011 at 3:14 PM
I like this one Nancy! Very visual and sensual. Wayne
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