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Give It To Me One More Time

Dark you glow 'gainst the shade of my lightness. In ya go, outcha go no doubt about it. Butterflies, lullabies much way around it. Do I care? Do you care? Let's think about it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/15/2011 1:52:00 PM
You're on a roll Nancy, wish it had another 10 lines. Great message between the lines luv. :)
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Date: 10/15/2011 9:54:00 AM
This is a little gem Nancy, it sure leaves the reader thinking. Have a lovely weekend :)
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Date: 10/14/2011 3:14:00 PM
I like this one Nancy! Very visual and sensual. Wayne
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