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Give It a Go

Give it a go, try something new This tale told in simple verse, view Compare its rhythm, rhyme and flow Try something new…give it a go Gone fishing, the sign did say On that blustery summer’s day We stood; we waited, still wishing… The sign did say, gone fishing The drive was long, the car was stuffy Eighty miles to visit Muffy To find him gone seemed so wrong The car was stuffy, the drive was long So the kids cried, they were very tired The surprise visit, uninspired Back in the car, the kids were plied They were very tired, so the kids cried Crying children, sighing parents A long drive home; undercurrents Of Frustration; all chasten Sighing parents, crying children There just may be a moral here When visiting, both far and near Call to see if your host is free A moral here … there just may be

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Date: 3/9/2014 11:29:00 AM
Huberta, this was sure out of the box and just fun!! Congrats in my contest. I appreciate how well metered this poem was.
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Date: 3/9/2014 10:10:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win.
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Date: 3/9/2014 5:00:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Enjoyed the rhyme perfect, huberta
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Date: 3/9/2014 1:28:00 AM
A great work you did here , congrats Huberta
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Date: 2/23/2014 8:38:00 PM
nice to read
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