Give In To Me

You are standing there
Solid
Resolute
Unbending
Unmoved
By my womanly charm

Your eyes look straight ahead
Not taking in my curves
Not noticing the look in my eyes
The sun dancing in my raven hair
The shimmer of my cherry lips

Your hands are in your pockets
Safe
Guarded
Captive
Under your command
Not able to give away
The little tremor I would see
Should they be exposed
I've seen it happen before
When I'm close...

Your whole demeanor
Distant
Disdainful
Displeased
And I smile a slow smile
Knowing
What lies beneath
For I have seen the unguarded looks
Of burning passion
You send my way
When you think I’m not looking

As I walk towards you
I wonder
What horrible experience
Made you this way
Cautious
Guarded
Weak

I walk past you
Almost touching
Making sure I’m close enough
For you to smell the perfume
That has become my signature scent
An extravaganza of
Giddy floral scents 
Orange blossom
Jasmine
And honey
ME
The scent of ME

I let it waft over you
And I turn around and watch
As you close your eyes
And breathe it in….deep
Unaware that I am watching you
Unaware that I see your stiff body relax
And lean into the scent
Captivated by your desire

You are trying
So hard
To close yourself up to me
I’m trying
So hard
To make you give in to me
Silently, I walk back up to you
I stand beside you
Quietly, gently 
I place my hand on your bare arm 
You flinch
As though touched by fire
I look up at you
And smile
An innocent little smile
An inviting smile
I see your eyes take me in
Focusing
Finally focusing on my eyes
Sending a silent message
A plea
To go gently
You are not made of steel

For a moment, I’m lost
And yet…I speak
Brazen
Bold
Beckoning
I know you want me….
That gives me strength
Sensing victory 
Within my reach
I move up closer
On my tiptoes
My lips almost touching yours
Almost
And I whisper….
“Don’t be afraid….
I won't hurt you...
Give in…
Give in to me
Give in”…and the rest of my words are devoured 
Along with my lips in your kiss
As you crush me up against you
Reserve falls to the flour
A crashing sound
That only I can hear
For it is enhanced by the sound
Of my frenetic heart beat
Pounding against my chest
Ecstasy
Urgency
Victory
VICTORY
“Give in
GIVE IN TO…..ME!”

Eileen Manassian Ghali

The Title of this Poem is the title of one of my favorite songs by the late great Michael Jackson…GIVE IN TO ME!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/23/2013 8:01:00 AM
Fierce & sensual, mixed with bold attitude & focus. A song that this reminds me of is called "Breathe into Me" from Red. Incredible song. Fits well with this piece. Awesome job!
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Date: 9/23/2013 10:58:00 AM
Red...as in SIMPLY RED??? I LOVE THAT GUY...IF that is the one you are talking about. Will check it RIGHT NOW! Thanks for the visit, Drake...Appreciate it.... :)
Date: 9/22/2013 5:27:00 PM
You're used to getting what you want aint yer my little Desert Orchid lol, by any means, I bet he's still nursing that burn on his arm coz you is on fire with this write. Take care, Richard
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Date: 9/23/2013 11:00:00 AM
HA HA HA! What a lovely post...YES...I am VERY demanding!!! (stamps foot) It's either MY WAY...or the HIGH WAY! ;) I hope he burns for a GOOD LONG TIME, Mr Seal....Thanks for the visit!!! :)
Date: 9/21/2013 4:53:00 PM
Mmmm, sensual and romantic. You sure drew that net enticingly tighter with every line. Hats off to you. YOU'VE GOT THE GIFT, QUEEN OF THE SENSUAL. Good going, girlfriend. Hugs, Licia :-)
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Date: 9/23/2013 11:01:00 AM
Net, eh???? Did I catch a whale of a man? ;) HA HA...dear me...I'm being silly. BUT...that is the terminology I used to use with my friends. You know...they always say there are other fish out in the sea? I say...Fish nothing...This is a whale! ;) Meaning...TOP OF THE LINE! Thanks, Girlfriend. Always a pleasure!
Date: 9/21/2013 2:16:00 PM
This is extremely alluring..enticing..sensual and intriguing dear.Excellent indeed
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 10:57:00 AM
Thanks, my dear Charmaine for that lovely string of adjectives...Hugs to you!
Date: 9/21/2013 1:43:00 PM
Sometimes a man looking away is a sign of strength rather than weakness. I enjoyed the feel and emotions you expressed in this piece.
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Date: 9/21/2013 1:47:00 PM
Yes, true...Have you heard of the book, Every Man's Battle? You should have a read because, from what I understand, it expresses what you mention here. Looking away when temptations comes your way. Yes, that is a sign of strength. Thank you for the kind post...
Date: 9/21/2013 8:24:00 AM
Your words create such a strong imagery, so much so that somewhere in between it looked like an advertisement for a perfume!! I'm glad I chanced upon this one, you've expressed so beautifully the feelings that come with love.
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Date: 9/21/2013 8:27:00 AM
Oh...thank you, Varsha. How sweet of you. Yes...the perfume is...Le Perfum by the famous Lebanese designer...ELIE SAAB. I'm simply captivated by him and his designs and since...I'm unable to wear any of his designs...I delight myself in wearing his perfume, which....is very heady and lovely! :) Thanks for the post, Varsha...Will visit you soon! :)
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