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Give In To Me

You are standing there Solid Resolute Unbending Unmoved By my womanly charm Your eyes look straight ahead Not taking in my curves Not noticing the look in my eyes The sun dancing in my raven hair The shimmer of my cherry lips Your hands are in your pockets Safe Guarded Captive Under your command Not able to give away The little tremor I would see Should they be exposed I've seen it happen before When I'm close... Your whole demeanor Distant Disdainful Displeased And I smile a slow smile Knowing What lies beneath For I have seen the unguarded looks Of burning passion You send my way When you think I’m not looking As I walk towards you I wonder What horrible experience Made you this way Cautious Guarded Weak I walk past you Almost touching Making sure I’m close enough For you to smell the perfume That has become my signature scent An extravaganza of Giddy floral scents Orange blossom Jasmine And honey ME The scent of ME I let it waft over you And I turn around and watch As you close your eyes And breathe it in….deep Unaware that I am watching you Unaware that I see your stiff body relax And lean into the scent Captivated by your desire You are trying So hard To close yourself up to me I’m trying So hard To make you give in to me Silently, I walk back up to you I stand beside you Quietly, gently I place my hand on your bare arm You flinch As though touched by fire I look up at you And smile An innocent little smile An inviting smile I see your eyes take me in Focusing Finally focusing on my eyes Sending a silent message A plea To go gently You are not made of steel For a moment, I’m lost And yet…I speak Brazen Bold Beckoning I know you want me…. That gives me strength Sensing victory Within my reach I move up closer On my tiptoes My lips almost touching yours Almost And I whisper…. “Don’t be afraid…. I won't hurt you... Give in… Give in to me Give in”…and the rest of my words are devoured Along with my lips in your kiss As you crush me up against you Reserve falls to the flour A crashing sound That only I can hear For it is enhanced by the sound Of my frenetic heart beat Pounding against my chest Ecstasy Urgency Victory VICTORY “Give in GIVE IN TO…..ME!” Eileen Manassian Ghali The Title of this Poem is the title of one of my favorite songs by the late great Michael Jackson…GIVE IN TO ME!

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Date: 9/23/2013 8:01:00 AM
Fierce & sensual, mixed with bold attitude & focus. A song that this reminds me of is called "Breathe into Me" from Red. Incredible song. Fits well with this piece. Awesome job!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 10:58:00 AM
Red...as in SIMPLY RED??? I LOVE THAT GUY...IF that is the one you are talking about. Will check it RIGHT NOW! Thanks for the visit, Drake...Appreciate it.... :)
Date: 9/22/2013 5:27:00 PM
You're used to getting what you want aint yer my little Desert Orchid lol, by any means, I bet he's still nursing that burn on his arm coz you is on fire with this write. Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 11:00:00 AM
HA HA HA! What a lovely post...YES...I am VERY demanding!!! (stamps foot) It's either MY WAY...or the HIGH WAY! ;) I hope he burns for a GOOD LONG TIME, Mr Seal....Thanks for the visit!!! :)
Date: 9/21/2013 4:53:00 PM
Mmmm, sensual and romantic. You sure drew that net enticingly tighter with every line. Hats off to you. YOU'VE GOT THE GIFT, QUEEN OF THE SENSUAL. Good going, girlfriend. Hugs, Licia :-)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 11:01:00 AM
Net, eh???? Did I catch a whale of a man? ;) HA HA...dear me...I'm being silly. BUT...that is the terminology I used to use with my friends. You know...they always say there are other fish out in the sea? I say...Fish nothing...This is a whale! ;) Meaning...TOP OF THE LINE! Thanks, Girlfriend. Always a pleasure!
Date: 9/21/2013 2:16:00 PM
This is extremely alluring..enticing..sensual and intriguing dear.Excellent indeed
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 10:57:00 AM
Thanks, my dear Charmaine for that lovely string of adjectives...Hugs to you!
Date: 9/21/2013 1:43:00 PM
Sometimes a man looking away is a sign of strength rather than weakness. I enjoyed the feel and emotions you expressed in this piece.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/21/2013 1:47:00 PM
Yes, true...Have you heard of the book, Every Man's Battle? You should have a read because, from what I understand, it expresses what you mention here. Looking away when temptations comes your way. Yes, that is a sign of strength. Thank you for the kind post...
Date: 9/21/2013 8:24:00 AM
Your words create such a strong imagery, so much so that somewhere in between it looked like an advertisement for a perfume!! I'm glad I chanced upon this one, you've expressed so beautifully the feelings that come with love.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/21/2013 8:27:00 AM
Oh...thank you, Varsha. How sweet of you. Yes...the perfume is...Le Perfum by the famous Lebanese designer...ELIE SAAB. I'm simply captivated by him and his designs and since...I'm unable to wear any of his designs...I delight myself in wearing his perfume, which....is very heady and lovely! :) Thanks for the post, Varsha...Will visit you soon! :)

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