Give and Take

As down the path of life I go
footprints in time I make
and Mother Nature gaily plays
her game of give and take.
She gives me wisdom every year
in varying degrees
but takes away the knowledge as
to where I've left my keys.
She takes my hair in wispy strands
each night from off my head
then kindly gives some back  inside
my nose and ears instead.
She's taken my well-toned physique
but left me with love handles
that smooth, taut neck now modified
looks like a melting candle.
Grim Reaper, when you come for me
I know thy scythe be sharp,
and take away my final breath
replace it with a Harp.
Until when that time comes, dear Lord
if you would be so kind
feel free to give more laughter lines-
don't take away my mind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/14/2016 8:49:00 AM
Love this poem, now in my favs, giving me smiles and more, well done ;-) (A 7)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/15/2016 12:02:00 AM
Thanks Laura, you're very kind. Glad you enjoyed it. Viv x
Date: 7/13/2016 2:43:00 AM
I love how easy this is to read, beautiful poem.
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Date: 7/13/2016 4:50:00 AM
As they say in church, Lewis, 'The Lord giveth and the Lord taketh away'. A bit too much taketh, as time goes on, sadly. Thanks for popping by. Regards, Viv
Date: 7/9/2016 5:47:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on having this delightful poem featured as POTD Viv! Cheers, Connie ; )
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/10/2016 12:24:00 AM
Thanks, Connie, but judging by your picture, the Good Lord isn't taking anything from you x
Date: 7/9/2016 3:19:00 PM
Where have you been?? And now on one day alone, you disgorge so many masterpiecs. This one mirrors my GETTING OLDER.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/10/2016 12:27:00 AM
Sorry for my absence, Jean, a fraught few months, lots of hospital and stuff for both me and my good lady and she isnt out of the woods yet. I havent had much time for the Soup, so scribbled bits of verse on scaprs of paper and eventually cobbled them all together at once. Viv
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/10/2016 12:27:00 AM
I told my friend these wrinkles are laughter lines, and he said " Tell me, what was THAT feckin funny?" x
Date: 7/9/2016 3:01:00 PM
Congrats Viv on POTD honor!! Really Funny for sure. Cheers and Best, Gary
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/10/2016 12:28:00 AM
Thanks, Gary, a surprise for me, but very kind. Regards, Viv
Date: 7/9/2016 9:33:00 AM
Hi Viv, I enjoyed your humorous take on aging. I also liked the "realness" of this well written piece.Congratulations on getting the poem of the day it was well deserved. Enjoy the honor. :-) Alexis
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/10/2016 12:34:00 AM
Thanks, Alexis, I shall high-five myself. Viv
Date: 7/9/2016 9:28:00 AM
A great poem filled with humour and pathos a very enjoyable read. Congrats on being selected for POTD.
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Date: 7/10/2016 12:31:00 AM
Thanks, Seosamh, I have to laugh at myself to drown out the sound of anyone else laughing at me :) . Regards, Viv
Date: 7/9/2016 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations Viv for POTD honors...
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/10/2016 12:31:00 AM
Many thanks, Charlie, a pleasant surprise. Regards, Viv
Date: 7/9/2016 8:36:00 AM
- Viv, congratulations on your magnificent poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/10/2016 12:30:00 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise x
Date: 7/9/2016 3:31:00 AM
You always leave me with a laugh Viv. It is so nice to have you back! I loved your humor in this honest telling of how age creeps up and changes us daily. 7 ; )
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/10/2016 12:30:00 AM
Be thankful I didn't mention my toenails, Connie. Ewww..... Viv x
Date: 7/9/2016 2:16:00 AM
Oh wow!!!!! That was wonderful!!!! Great job!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/10/2016 12:29:00 AM
Thanks, Misty, glad you liked it. Viv x
Date: 7/8/2016 11:13:00 PM
Serious plus levity with a great rhyme scheme. Could poetry reading get any better? I, too, have written humor about aging, and drama about how quickly we change in the mirror. I know I'm too young to be this old! Love the poem ... and your return ... CayCay
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/10/2016 12:29:00 AM
You don't look old from here, Cay Cay, Viv x
Date: 7/8/2016 5:12:00 PM
wow, this is AMAZING work, Viv. I love it. FAVE!!!
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Date: 7/10/2016 12:29:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea, hope you're doing fine. Viv x
Date: 7/8/2016 9:02:00 AM
Wonderful to see you're posting again. A wonderful bit of wisdom in your clever and humorous fashion.
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Date: 7/8/2016 2:32:00 PM
Thanks, James, nice to be back into the groove. Lots of catching up to do. Hope you're well. Regards, Viv
Date: 7/7/2016 9:47:00 PM
this is a Fav, I couldn't have said it better myself!
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Date: 7/7/2016 10:40:00 PM
Thanks, Arthur, but then again, what is sanity? hmmm..... Regards, Viv
Date: 7/7/2016 4:28:00 PM
Your poem is both humorous and insightful, Viv! Great rhyme and rhythm, too! Glad to see you back writing on the soup. I've gone through a dry spell myself lately... :)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/7/2016 10:42:00 PM
Hi, Laura, yes, life has been chaotic for us two at this end, with hospital, surgery, problems of a psychiatric nature with a close relative which is ongoing, as a result my muse went walkabout. Like my cat, she comes home when hungry, I suppose. Hope you're well. Viv x
Date: 7/7/2016 6:55:00 AM
Love the humor, Viv. Favorite line is that smooth taut neck... had me laughing out loud. Thank you for sharing a laugh today!
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Date: 7/7/2016 10:37:00 AM
Old age and poverty. Our worst enemies, Daniel. Please try and stay crinkle free. Regards, Viv
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