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When I was 5, I loved a girl Genie was her name She was my very best friend I know she felt the same I'd always plant one on her cheek At the end of play day That is, until my mother cried: "You shouldn't behave that way! She's not a cousin She's not a sister She's a girl You shouldn't kiss her!" But I love girls How can this be wrong? There is no sweeter melody Calling to me like a Siren's song Whenever I am with them I feel like I belong Precious pretty pearls Girls For Danielle White's Contest "My Earliest Memory"

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Date: 6/9/2009 11:30:00 PM
Thank you for your welcome blog comment Corinne.Best wishes with this poem.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/9/2009 4:13:00 AM
I congratulate you on an excellent poem, i espcially like the middle bit of what your mum said- mine felt the same about my sister.
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Date: 6/5/2009 1:56:00 AM
Corinne, A kiss on the cheek is a loving way to share feelings. I had a girl friend in 5th grade that I loved dearly. We walked home from school, girl talking, often holding hands. She went to ballet, I went on home. In middle school, we were teased. I dumped her as a friend. Almost 50 years later, I still regret it. I was immature, unkind and too influenced by others. Part of it was finding out who I was. I wish I could tell her that I am sorry. She had been my very best friend.
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Date: 6/4/2009 11:31:00 PM
Best wishes with this one Corinne & thanks for your blog comment today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/2/2009 5:31:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comment Corinne.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/30/2009 8:14:00 AM
OOOOOOOWWWWWW! I love 'em too, but not the way you do. How ya doin? I think you are great, standing up for what you believe in, what you are. You are a sweetheart. Love, daver
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Date: 5/29/2009 6:20:00 PM
so sweet..and we are sweet LOL HUGS this Mom says all kisses given in love are just good and fine! Light & Love
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Date: 5/28/2009 10:37:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful. Good luck! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/28/2009 10:18:00 AM
HAHA.Love dis one:)
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