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'girl With the Perfect Smile'

A pic i saw on my P.C. screen! Her smile was mind blowing, amazing & clean! When she smiled, her lips formed a curve! It was so appealing, I was compelled to observe! When i checked out her eyes, It sparkled like a gem! I'm sure if she'd wink, It would create mayhem! 'You Know Who' is the name of the girl! Her sweet little smile made me twist & twirl! Dedicated with love to: You Know Who

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/19/2011 11:24:00 PM
Thanks a lot everyone! The comments are very encouraging. I appreciate the effort taken to read my poem. Thanks again.
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Date: 2/19/2011 5:54:00 PM
very creative and interesting write, Jose
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Date: 2/19/2011 3:20:00 PM
such a sweet write to you know who lol, she seems to have captured your heart, enjoyed your write,..p.d.
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Date: 2/19/2011 10:34:00 AM
Cute little poem about young love. Your rhyming is good.
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Date: 2/19/2011 10:00:00 AM
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