Jose Panicker Poet Rhyme

'girl With the Perfect Smile'

A pic i saw 
on my P.C. screen!
Her smile was
mind blowing, amazing & clean!

When she smiled,
her lips formed a curve!
It was so appealing,
I was compelled to observe!

When i checked out her eyes,
It sparkled like a gem!
I'm sure if she'd wink,
It would create mayhem!

'You Know Who' 
is the name of the girl!
Her sweet little smile
made me twist & twirl!

Dedicated with love to: You Know Who

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Jose Panicker February 19, 2011 at 11:24 PM Thanks a lot everyone! The comments are very encouraging. I appreciate the effort taken to read my poem. Thanks again.

Dr.Ram Mehta February 19, 2011 at 5:54 PM very creative and interesting write, Jose

Poet Destroyer A February 19, 2011 at 3:20 PM such a sweet write to you know who lol, she seems to have captured your heart, enjoyed your write,..p.d.

Robert Pettit February 19, 2011 at 10:34 AM Cute little poem about young love. Your rhyming is good.

Jose Panicker February 19, 2011 at 10:00 AM