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Girl of My Dreams

Oh, she's beautiful She , the only girl who left me, mesmerized . I sat and watched as she brushed her long golden hair. She smiled politely at everyone. She saw good in everyone. Many said she was the daughter of the ocean as her hair swayed with the waves in perfect harmony. She would lay on a rock singing with the most beautiful voice , just as I was about to talk to her. I woke up. By A.Mbali

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Date: 7/27/2023 9:28:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 7/25/2023 8:42:00 AM
Beautiful dream
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Ayakha Mbali
Date: 7/26/2023 9:30:00 AM
Thank u

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