Girl In the Silhouetted Dress

Wine stained o'er the coal-black lace
A monotone of laughter left no trace
Next page had a spectrum of shades of grey
The ribbon on the palette was moulded with clay 
Microscopic pellets on the bed side table
A blithe entity is a morose historic fable
Mystic pink sugar plums held no sugar
Colourless rotten endearment as the trigger

If tis' love, then the committed became a wreck
Crestfallen, stubborn ambers hung around her neck
A jade bangle locked her overflowing energetic soul
Teardrops o' sapphires hauled her ears to doubt till ol'
Amethyst on her ring finger, mistress to a caged château
A spinning wheel sat and away with thread she stow'd
A weaver of a solid heart in garish garments became a mess
Absurd with hue for she aid to see her silhouetted dress
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 10:09 PM
Thanks for the lovely thanks... I hope you are enjoying the contest. My sister and I, have lots more good themes like this one. Linda
A   Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 12:48 AM
Anna, Congratulations in the SKAT contest. LINDA
Li Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 8:24 PM
Thanks Linda once again! :)
A. Sharma Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:44 PM
Congrats on ur great win with this colourful write Anna..
Li Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 8:24 PM
Thank you :) :)
Gulley Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:16 AM
An amazing imagery write, my pen friend. I so enjoyed your silhouetted dress. Thanks for sharing and Congrats on your win in Skat's colorful contest.....Sharon : )
Li Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 8:23 PM
Thanks Sharon! Glad you enjoyed it! :D
A  Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 9:51 AM
Anna Li, Congratulations on your awesome colored win. Drop by my blog " Character Sketch" if ya like. LOVE ** SKAT **
Li Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 8:23 PM
Thank you Skat! It was heaps fun! I really enjoy your contests and I would love to check out your blog!
A   Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 9:43 PM
ANNA, THANK YOU for blessing my comment with a reply. THAT WAS NICE OF YOU!!! PD**
Li Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 8:22 PM
You're more than welcome! *hugs* :)
A   Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 6:15 PM
Wonderful and amazing imagery. Love the title. LINDA
Li Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 10:29 PM
Thank you Linda, glad you liked it
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