Girl In the Mirror

GIRL IN THE MIRROR  *

Like a ship’s compass sits in the binnacle unmoving
While  the vessel rolls and pitches, 
As if her eyes and head were on separate swivel bearings
She faced me as I spoke but the eyes rolled 
Magnetically to the mirror at her side,
Assessing the exact shape and size
Of all the important parts of her outline
From all possible angles, all possible lighting,
While making written notes of  my instructions.
And the pen moved unerringly across the paper,
Quickly, error-free and blotless,  yet unguided
By eyes which were otherwise engaged:
And she asked politely if that was all, and smiled 
At herself as she ushered me from the office,
So she could confront her image more directly
With her automatically-homing radar  eyes :
And get an exact bearing on her bows and stern.

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NOTE

*This shop girl in Moscow was much more interested  in her
 own image in the mirror than in talking directly to my face.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Pritts Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 9:51 PM
That was confusing from the first line. But reading the note was like turning on a lightbulb. I read it again and everything made sense. Excellent job. Rockman
Bauer Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 3:47 PM
clever and entertaining! you made your point wonderfully!
Mjelde Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 3:25 PM
This is great. Good description! Thank you for sharing! oxox hugs Laila
Andresen Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 1:44 PM
:) :) funny one,Sidney. (I have a morror poem to) - like youer`s alot...lol - Anne-Lise
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