Girl In Red Cotton Hose

Barn dancing, taffy pulling, bobing for apples
Enters the girl with the red cotton hose 
Riding in a wagon pulled by horse of gray dappled

Prettiest girl, girl of his dreams, her smile was ample
Asking her for a dance he's so glad he chose
Barn dancing, taffy pulling, bobing for apples

So much fun those community socials one can't grapple
At the notion, meeting new people where love can grow
Riding in wagon pulled by horse of gray dappled

Fun in the hay all the way as they rode as a couple
Now more fun inside the barn my she has cutest nose
Barn dancing, taffy pulling, bobing for apples

Bobing for apples showing her how to grapple
All the way down, show her how it goes
Riding in wagon pulled by horse gray dappled

So much fun with the girl in red cotton hose
Some day after love with her grows their children goes
Barn dancing, taffy pulling, bobing for apples
Riding in the wagon pulled by a horse gray dappled

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/11/2009 2:45:00 PM
Superb poem Sara, this was a joy to read>> and it oozed imagery gallore>>James
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Date: 9/8/2009 12:51:00 PM
love it mom, keep sharing your memories!!
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Date: 9/8/2009 10:14:00 AM
Sensational poem Sara. Thank you. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/8/2009 8:25:00 AM
simple pleasures-simple life-i'm off to Tennessee..........red ctten hose?...really?....o
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Date: 9/7/2009 6:47:00 PM
enjoyed! Sara!...jim
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Date: 9/7/2009 6:39:00 PM
Wonderful write Sara! Thanks for all of the comments! ~jen~
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Date: 9/7/2009 6:24:00 PM
This felt dizzy jojoojo like running in a spiral ways @.@ and I love it xD the language, I mean...read outloud this tastes good!! thanks for the experience =D and for the read C= PS: Don't trust dictionaries that much...they're...evil!!!
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Date: 9/7/2009 5:17:00 PM
You have a knack for bringing these amazing functions to life in your writes Sara. Flows like a personal adventure, as being there in person. I thought of going to barn dances and so on, and so forth, years ago. Excellent job. Sincerely Moses
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Date: 9/7/2009 4:35:00 PM
Hi Sara What a joy to read this amazing Villanelle. Takes me down memory lane! A wonderful feel. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/7/2009 4:00:00 PM
A wonderful Villanelle Sara! Very nostalgic feel. Thank you also for your comments on my new poems also. ~Trudy
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Date: 9/7/2009 3:52:00 PM
Delightful poem, Sara! Love the life the "girl in red cotton hose" leads. Very joyful! Love, Carolyn
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