Notes About The Poem

Girl

girl's playful sundress
matching hot pink sunglasses
~ tea time with her dolls



AP: Honorable Mention 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Cozart Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 11:52 AM
Very cute and amusing.
Gauthier Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Thanks, Dale. Much appreciated.
Talbot Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 2:22 AM
Great haiku, love the twist, remember having a family picnic where the blanket was put over a red ants nest, we all got stung!
Gauthier Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 9:32 AM
Oops. They were there first ! Thanks for your lovely visit and comment. I feel itchy all of a sudden...
Rodrigues Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 6:07 PM
Makes me smile!
Gauthier Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 8:56 PM
Thanks, Kim, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Roper Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 4:09 PM
darn ants
Gauthier Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 8:55 PM
Keeps kiddies amused. LOL
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace