David William Breidenthal Poet Senryu

Ginger Snaps

Sweet, yummy treats
Melt into my mouth so fast!
Taste buds dance in joy

These candies make my 
Mouth water merrily! WOW! 
Who made these sweethearts?

Sugary candy
Is not nearly as great as
These sugah mommas!

Reminding me of
Cherished childhood memories
I want some more, please?

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Jake Ponce May 21, 2014 at 8:06 PM Ok give me my candy cane back! LOL

Jan Allison May 20, 2014 at 4:50 PM I simply adore anything with ginger in David. I make the most awesome ginger cake with stem ginger lining the bottom of the tin mmmmm. Fabulous poem made my mouth water! Hugs as ever my friend. Jan xxxxx

Tim Smith May 20, 2014 at 3:37 PM Ok DWB now I'm going to have to go to the store and get some candy

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 20, 2014 at 3:07 PM mmmn this a sugar rush but leaving you to want more... :D wish its lil longer, olive :)