Gin and Tonic Magic



Was making dinner for my honey, mine.

I realized, alas, I added far too much thyme.

He whispered, “you are thinking way too much of rhyme!”

Quickly I filled us glasses, with ice-cold tonic, gin and lime.

That softened him and he softly whispered,

“Well, I guess after all, it’s no big crime.”

He was my love, so invitingly delicious and ever so sublime.

A peek for you, into my love-life’s, poetic summertime!


                             7/22/2022
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 9/20/2022 9:02:00 PM
I really enjoyed this poem, from the title to end, and it’s summertime cold drink :)
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 9/21/2022 10:17:00 AM
Good morning! I can be morose too but i keep that part of me locked in the dungeons Have a lovely day ! it’s so nice to have rain again :)
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/21/2022 8:59:00 AM
Good morning, Susan. I sense in you…a sparkling personality! You enjoy life and all its pleasures! Your picture shows the joy you have in living! Cheers..Pangie xx
Date: 8/31/2022 2:30:00 PM
Very clever, funny + engaging. Nothing like dinner time, one's mate, a beverage + a little seasoning to spice one's muse into action. Well done! Brian
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/21/2022 8:55:00 AM
Brian, I really forgot I wrote this. It is a fun poem And monorhyme Iis one of my favorite forms. I loved your summary of the poem…you have a grand sense of humor and life as well! Here’s to you and your appreciation of life! Thank you! Cheers., Pangie xx
Date: 7/27/2022 6:29:00 PM
I feel my family think the are sometimes being ignored because of my "poeting". LOL Linda
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/27/2022 6:57:00 PM
So true Pangie. We strive for balance. Hope your evening is going well, too! Linda
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/27/2022 6:46:00 PM
Linda…they might! It’s a balancing act, methinks. Not that simple to pen coherent poems..comment and do what your family needs done. Family should come first, always. The site will be here tomorrow. Plus you must care for you. And pets if you have any. And relaxation is a must.nice to see you today. Have a pleasant evening, Panagiota xxx
Date: 7/26/2022 1:20:00 PM
Hi Panagiota, Loved this wonderful write. Well, I have my humour for this evening. I loved the rhyming and the story in equal amounts. An excellent piece. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 7/26/2022 3:36:00 PM
You don't worry about commenting, my friend. You get feeling better. That is what is important ..... Mike. XX
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/26/2022 2:48:00 PM
My dear Mike! I rarely try humor, I certainly was not advocating for liquor. The scene just came to my imagination, equal amounts is an appropriate and true evaluation of this poem. I apologize for not commenting to your poetry… I am not feeling well today, yuk. Just trying to sleep and get better. Thank you and I wish you the very best. Panagiota xxx
Date: 7/25/2022 7:06:00 AM
Oh i love this, the panorama of a peek, the poetry is superb, not only clever, and a touch of humour, but truly interesting also.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/25/2022 9:37:00 AM
Thank you, Harry. I could not have summed it up as well as you did! It takes a true poet like you to see all those qualities. Add the music of the Gershwins to this..you have me on a roll! Many thanks, Panagiota xxx
Date: 7/24/2022 8:42:00 AM
this is cute and summery, you rhyming lady you!!!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/25/2022 9:31:00 AM
Yes, Andrea! I love music and poetry. They have much in common. Watching an old movie of the Gershwin brothers. Awesome…music and rhymed poetry make my heart sing! Thank you. Panagiota xxx
Date: 7/23/2022 6:45:00 PM
Pangie, ice-cold tonic, gin and lime in summertime sounds sublime, too much thyme and rhyme, who cares when one’s having a wonderful time… Belle x
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/25/2022 9:27:00 AM
Belle…deserves a COTD..,wonderfully poetic comment and delightful for this poet to read. I think lyrically,so big smiles from this humble poet to read. Panagiota xxx
Date: 7/23/2022 3:00:00 PM
A cute/fun write. Now we know your secret. Have a fun/blessed weekend..............
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/23/2022 3:23:00 PM
Hey, Paula. It’s so nice to know it was fun! That means I achieved my goal! Love makes eating a true delight…my family is in Reno! No, not gambling! Grandson pitching in baseball tournaments …they already won four games. Yaa! Panagiota xxx
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