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Gimme Some of That Flavor

I tasted you, then my body temperature rose sky high. 

        Now I crave you from top to bottom; my thirst unquenchable. 

Mouth-watering! You're the piquant sauce on my tongue! 



Date written: 11/13/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kauffman Avatar
June 9, 2023 at 11:14 AM
Really nicely done Edward. Delicious! Classically romantic. Congrats and high fives! Pass the chips! Blessings my friend!
Ibeh Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 11:48 AM
Thank you very much as always, Sam:-)
Richards Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 6:23 AM
Nice Sijo, Edward. Congratulations:)
Ibeh Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 10:14 AM
Thank you very much, Suzette:-)
Andresen Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 4:41 AM
- A erotic poem, Edward :) - Congrats on your win...love that last line :) - hugs
Ibeh Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 5:06 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)
La France Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 2:11 AM
Edward, oh how sensual and beautiful, congratulations on your win in the contest !
Ibeh Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 2:22 AM
Thank you so much, Constance:-)
Hankins Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 9:16 AM
Wow, Edward, this is really exceptionally sensual. Nicely done!
Ibeh Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 4:04 PM
Thank you very much, Milt:-)
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