GIGANTIC GIFTS


Oh cash, won’t you give me large, financial gifts? Others all spend plenty, I need huge green lifts. Punched clocks during work life, just earned me short-shrift, So, cash, won’t you give me large, financial gifts? Oh cash, won’t you make me your direct payee? Surely some millions have been endorsed straight to me. I wait for my treasure with no apology, So, oh cash, won’t you make me your direct payee? Oh cash, won’t you buy me each desire I dream? I’m running on cents, cash, please send a thick ream. Show that you hear me by backing this scheme, Oh cash, won’t you buy me each desire I dream? All Who Want Cash! Oh cash, won’t you give us large, financial gifts? Others all spend plenty, we need huge green lifts. Punched clocks during work life, just earned us short shrift, So, cash, won’t you give us large, financial gifts? Song Done! heeeheeeheee ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
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Scars Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 8:19 AM
this is great CayCay! so much fun and love the rhyming :) congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Lamoureux Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 10:22 PM
So much fun! Congrats.
White Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 9:37 PM
I absolutely love the lyrics to Janis Joplin, can even hear her sing your song in my head. Congratulations!!!
Nance Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 9:26 PM
I feel the mood and blues in your write and I can hear Janis Joplin's voice in every word. Well done win
Hoffman Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 8:40 AM
This is such a great alternative to Janis Joplin's Mercedes Benz lyrics, G/L in the contest!:)
Godwin Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 9:25 AM
Thank you, Cheryl. I am so curious to know if you heard my version in your head. I'm tone deaf so it worked for me! I'm sure many writers will submit more serious and challenging entries - mine is more humorous than anything. All the best ... CayCay
Scars Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 12:56 PM
Love dis this lovely CayCay!-luloo:)
Godwin Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 2:19 PM
Huh? I get love and lovely and those words matter most, right? Thanks, Laura ... CayCay
Allison Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 11:26 AM
ha ha ha great one CayCay good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Godwin Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 11:40 AM
Thank you, thank you! (you wouldn't think so if you heard me sing it!) Love ya ... CayCay
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