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Gifts of the Dawn

the dawn brings me many sweet kisses, even when everything around is in pieces. the dawn brings me many blessing, to start the day with joyous singing. the day brings me rising hopes, of a better swing on dangerous ropes. the dawn brings me renewed courage, to march on and overcome challenge. the dawn brings me abundant pleasure, for I know the day will bring treasure. the dawn brings me joyous laughter, for i know i will conquer the day's monster.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/6/2013 6:40:00 PM
well, I am going in circles again looking for a poem of yours to read but I remember I sure did like this one about a year ago when I saw it! (and good for you, you corrected it from when I told you last year!)
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Date: 8/8/2012 2:45:00 PM
REally nice one here. A small grammar tip: say "many a blessing" since it is singular. Otherwise, it would be "many blessings."
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Date: 8/8/2012 4:11:00 PM
Thanks, I will correct that.

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