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Gifts of Love

I used to say I love you, many years ago – My passion-cries were wings of flight! Like burning arrows pierced upon a snowy night, I loosed my songs to let you know. So long ago! So many years will change a man. And now the songs of love lie burnt Like cindered, wasted chars of music never learnt. I live my life as best I can. So now I only open doors for you - you nod. I rub your aching back - you moan. You only frown - I work my fingers to the bone. My quiver’s broken, bare and flawed. I still go on, I weed your flower beds - you pout. I always serve as you command. I take you to a restaurant - I hold your hand. You point to trash - I take it out. I buy you gifts - you ask me of my whereabouts. I see your tears - I hold you near, My arrows burnt by what I hold most dear - Your nods, your frowns, your tears and pouts.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/12/2015 2:57:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Mark Ackerson
Date: 5/12/2015 4:31:00 PM
Thanks, Sara!
Date: 5/11/2015 10:26:00 AM
Mark, stopping back to read your awesome poem once again and to congratulate your on your fine win! Sandra
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Mark Ackerson
Date: 5/12/2015 4:30:00 PM
Thanks for stopping, Sandra. I truly appreciate your words!
Date: 5/10/2015 6:27:00 PM
Nicely done Markus. Loved it and congrats on the win mate
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Mark Ackerson
Date: 5/12/2015 4:28:00 PM
Hey, great name, Mark! Thanks!
Date: 5/10/2015 3:37:00 PM
oh my!! Kind of a sad one, I must say. But I love the quality of your writing. So nice to find someone new like you here. Congrats on a well deserved win. You are my newest favorite poet.
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Mark Ackerson
Date: 5/10/2015 4:45:00 PM
Shucks Andrea, I'm all bushy now... thanks!
Date: 5/10/2015 11:07:00 AM
Congratulations Mark. SKAT
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Mark Ackerson
Date: 5/10/2015 12:19:00 PM
Thanks Skat, not something I would ordinarily write...
Date: 5/10/2015 10:00:00 AM
Mark, congratulations on the fine win... PD
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Mark Ackerson
Date: 5/10/2015 10:23:00 AM
Thanks, PD!
Date: 5/10/2015 8:27:00 AM
Guess we do change over the years but our love remains strong - a great take on the theme :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Mark Ackerson
Date: 5/10/2015 10:26:00 AM
we change alright, all I need do is look in the mirror
Date: 5/1/2015 2:49:00 PM
Wonderful, Mark. Yes, married love does manifest itself differently as the years go by, but it still remains love. This was very touching. I think you based it on Visual 2. The rules ask that we show what visual beneath the poem. Best wishes for the contest! Sandra
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Mark Ackerson
Date: 5/2/2015 2:32:00 PM
LOL, I keep botching contest rules. Thanks, Sandra!

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