Gifts From Above

Adrift in slumber
My eyes see floating presents
Fall from the heavens
Colorful array around
As people collect them all



Written by
Cecil Hickman


Sponsor Michael J. Falotico 
Contest Name "Tanka me a Dream"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Heckman Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 9:30 AM
a very restful place this poem is... julie
Poet Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 11:27 AM
Wonderful dream penned by you Cecil!Love it--kashinath
Loving Iii Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 9:33 AM
what a dream. Jhl
Onclaud Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 3:31 AM
a lullabye of a dream, cecil... beautifully rendered! win, win! :) huggs, nette
Adeite Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 11:59 PM
wonderful dream, hope the gift are stars ;) good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing this with us, please keep painting your poetry pad with the cute colours of creativity. Hope to read more from you. Have a great weekend dear friend! Love always, Adeleke.
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February 11, 2011 at 10:18 PM
this a beautiful tanka written in an elegant style
Neels Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 9:51 PM
Cecil what a stunner of a dream to have can just imagine the happy faces all around.. Good luck for MJF's contest ;-)
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February 11, 2011 at 9:50 PM
Very cool dream to have, Cecil! Good luck in the contest. Luv, Andrea
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