Gift Wrappers

I'm not the surprise
Neither the gift.
I'm just a thin layer
Wrapped around his skin.

I'm not what you asked for.
It is him all the time.
And you tear me off whenever
You call him "Mine."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 12/24/2024 11:59:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 12/7/2017 12:03:00 AM
Super poem with subliminal tones n theme. Artsy muse. Thumbs up. So nice to read from your pen again. Pls do review my latest poem too.
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Date: 8/13/2017 4:00:00 PM
A poem of mystery. Want to know more. Intriguing
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Date: 6/12/2017 3:31:00 AM
Very interesting Hansi!!!
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