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Written for the contest " gift of recovery" sponsored by Kai M N

Here, within my dark abyss of stark silence, I hear the jangling tunes of rusted chains echo futile summer dreams like wildflower chimes in the wind, comforting my inner moon~ still bleeding self-inflicted sorrow, in need of a balmy muse as my heart painfully exhales poetry, breathing in the peace of petrichor, grieving through my pen on paper amidst procrastinated punctuations, confusing the columns of calm between the quiet quotations of healing. But somewhere between the unpredictable lines of emotional storms, you’ll find our forgotten feelings, sedated by fireflies fluttering through the musical mists of sleepless nights, quenched like once upon a sacred quill, floating amongst salt and light, like a crescent’s rose blooming into the blues, learning to erase the unspoken shadows lining the boulevard of my weathered soul, for this is the song of the pearl resting in a sand-soaked bed of broken shells, turning oceanic pages with metaphors that ebb and flow, like a collage of dancing diamonds, cleansed with colors of sunsets softer than the chorus of h o p e wrapped like souvenirs laced in saffron and sage.

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Date: 11/25/2024 12:38:00 PM
IE, it seems to me you will always be a pearl whether resting on what could be perfection or a bed of broken shells. We can only control ourselves and where we are. Others around us will hopefully behave well and civilly. As you note, the remnants of what we go through are there for us to think about and provide memories we can develop a peaceful relationship to.
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Date: 11/13/2024 8:16:00 AM
Simply wonderful. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Sending you loving wishes, Kai
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Date: 11/11/2024 8:25:00 AM
Ink Empress, I am in awe of your poetry! Captivating!
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Date: 11/8/2024 5:59:00 PM
Hugs! Wishing the best to your muse and healing to your spirit.... <3
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Date: 11/3/2024 10:22:00 AM
Nice imagery Ink. Your poems are so visual it makes me wonder what they would look like as paintings or animation.
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Date: 11/3/2024 2:04:00 AM
A lot of pain running through this classic. Always wonder as humans if we need to hit rock bottom before we can rise up stronger. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/3/2024 7:49:00 AM
Thank you dear paul for reading and for leaving such a thoughtful comment appreciate your visits always
Date: 11/2/2024 7:27:00 PM
I like the metaphors and the tale of soft resignation to the pain in a soul. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 11/3/2024 7:49:00 AM
Thank you so much sweet hilda im grateful for your kindness and support
Date: 11/2/2024 1:30:00 PM
Like the Phoenix arising from the ashes, your engaging words speak to the adage that hope shines eternal within the human breast. Your eloquent depictions of life's challenges that we all must endure comes with a redeeming, glistening silver lining. With a nod to John Lennon--We all shine on. My best, Robert
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Date: 11/3/2024 7:51:00 AM
That is such a beautiful and poetic comment dear Robert, thank you so much i am grateful for your uplifting comment s
Date: 11/2/2024 2:52:00 AM
You know I felt every word so strongly and deeply here... sigh! When life sends our souls in exile, we struggle and tend to find solace within fragmented alphabets that slip from the cracks of our heart. Poetry is truly therapeutic and the reason we are actually able to breathe, hah! I love your descriptions throughout, although aching, but they hit like home to me! "this is the song of the pearl resting in a sand-soaked bed of broken shells, turning oceanic pages with metaphors that ebb and flow" So gorgeous! The poetry related vocab you've used is absolutely genuine, whilst delicately combining with alliteration too! Your metaphors and imagery always give me peace, dear fairy goddess... "sedated by fireflies fluttering through the musical mists of sleepless nights" Ethereally inked!
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Date: 11/3/2024 7:52:00 AM
Dear angelic star thank you so very much for reading and for leaving such a soulful and kind comment that truly is uplifting and did make me feel seen and heard. Grateful truly
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Date: 11/2/2024 2:55:00 AM
I loved reading this beyond words! "like wildflower chimes in the wind, comforting my inner moon~ still bleeding self-inflicted sorrow" Speaks to my soul in an emotion-glazed dialect! Wonderfully crafted in every way using so many incredible techniques as well ~ best wishes for the contest. Sending lots of love and light to you always ~
Date: 11/1/2024 9:02:00 PM
From the dark abyss, we emerge "like a crescent’s rose blooming into the blues, learning to erase the unspoken shadows lining the boulevard of weathered soul, breathing in the peace of petrichor." This is exactly what we feel with the Gift of Recovery. Each one achieves it in varied ways. You derive it through your poetry "with metaphors that ebb and flow, like a collage of dancing diamonds" ! May I repeat- Your poems are indeed a collage of dancing diamonds. All the Best dear Empress.
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Date: 11/3/2024 7:52:00 AM
You always are so mindful and thoughtful with how you leave comments so grateful dear sweet valsa
Date: 11/1/2024 7:56:00 PM
At first I was thinking it was for Crystol's contest because I saw what looked like two parts around 20 lines each!
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Date: 11/2/2024 12:50:00 AM
Lol ill forgive you for thinking that soul aunt, i need to respond to your email, will soupmail you with my response, morning!
Date: 11/1/2024 7:55:00 PM
I did not have a clue how to do this one, but you clearly set it up, the sorrow introduced in first verse and the hope of recovery described so well in verse 2: a fave, Inky
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Date: 11/3/2024 7:58:00 AM
Dear sweet andrea to get a fave from you is always truly an honor, thank you so very much! I appreciate your kindness and support
Date: 11/1/2024 6:12:00 PM
"A collage of dancing diamonds, " now this I'd love to see dear Ink, along with all those lovely souvenirs you hold and cherish in your heart !
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Date: 11/1/2024 3:53:00 PM
This poem shows just how important writing is. Writing is healing for all things and your writing is beautiful. Well expressed. Excellent. I hope you have a nice night :)
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Date: 11/1/2024 3:46:00 PM
Fireflies fluttering through the musical mists of sleepless nights... a gift from above I think. I picture someone with a troubled, restless mind, unable to sleep. Peering out the window scores of fireflies are lighting up the moonless night bringing a sense of peace and tranquility. Anyway, that's what I'm taking away. Lovely write
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Date: 11/1/2024 2:20:00 PM
within my dark abyss of stark silence,.. love the eerie start.. comforting my inner moon still bleeding self-inflicted sorrow,.. ooo the depth in that line papi!!! you’ll find our forgotten feelings, sedated by fireflies fluttering through the musical mists of sleepless nights,ooo the gorgeousness in this line !!! The flow is breathtakingly constructed .. learning to erase the unspoken shadows lining the boulevard of my weathered soul, aaah the magnificence is divine!!! turning oceanic pages with metaphors that ebb and flow, like a collage of dancing diamonds, wrapped like souvenirs laced in saffron and sage. love the imagery papi.. absolutely gorgeous
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Date: 11/1/2024 2:15:00 PM
A verse of despair that rises to one of hope, something that we should never give up on. Best of luck in the contest IE, and have an enjoyable weekend. Tom
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Date: 11/3/2024 7:48:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Tom, hope weekend is treating you well too. Grateful always for your support
Date: 11/1/2024 11:27:00 AM
‘ through the musical mists of sleepless night’… sounds like a job for Glenn Hughes. I enjoyed reading your poem. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/1/2024 1:27:00 PM
Glenn Hughes ah, thank you that must be a massive compliment, im Honored. Appreciate your visit dear Robert
Date: 11/1/2024 11:22:00 AM
Our forgotten feelings … awwww
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Date: 11/1/2024 1:03:00 PM
Awwn thank you

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